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By : AgentGv01

From ANON - soulhope on September 24, 2014
if thouse two started living to gether as in spider-man and spider woman i say they would screw in a mattress into the roof. or just go spider themed with a massive rooms sized hamick
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From marvelmaster616 on September 21, 2014
Another fun chapter that offered some nice insight into a character that doesn't get enough of it (in more ways than one). Love what you did with Jessica here, playing up all the mistrust she has to deal with. It's something I think gets overlooked. We've never really seen her deal with it and I think you handled it nicely here. I also like how you found a way to squeeze in a cameo for Aphrodite. That was a nice touch. So was a quickie in the elevator. lol Jessica doesn't seem all that big on foreplay. She likes to get down to business. I can see that totally working for her. I can also see her having a few unique tastes, like oral. You've done a good job giving every female character little quirks like that. It makes each chapter feel unique and enjoyable. It also makes each chapter worth waiting for. Another winner here, my friend! Keep up the awesome work.

MarvelMaster616
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From ANON - Spidey_Legend on September 20, 2014
Is "The Virgin" Anya Spidergirl Coraz�n like you mention in Julia's chapter?
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From Shadow-Of-The-Guardian on September 20, 2014
Ah, interesting and unique way for two spider-powered heroes to get together. I definitely like the part where you kept it real about the part where most people who screw on carpeted floors tend to get some rug burn because of their actions. Get 'heated up' in more ways than just one.

Cool way to have Aphrodite move things along and I love the reaction Jessica had with her subtle words. Nice internal debate between Jessica's logical and instinctual self at the bar scene. Though it's a first time between the two, a good way to have elevator sex but I thought whenever the emergency button is pushed, an alarm goes off. In a way, Jessica guaranteed that someone was going to see her and Peter going at in the elevator if an alarm was triggered.

Can't wait to see what else you've got cooked up and who "The Virgin" will be.
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From marvelmaster616 on July 25, 2014
Another quality chapter, my friend. Julia never struck me as being overly repressed, but she was definitely reserved. I think you brought that out in just the right ways. Her sensing Peter's activities with all the other women seemed to send her over the edge. lol But does that mean she can also sense Aphrodite's activities? Can she pick up on the spell she cast over him? I'd like to see that revisited at some point since you say Jessica Drew is going to be last. I like how you had Julia notice all the different peculiarities with the other women. That's the kind of detail I don't usually see in these fics and I applaud you for it. I like how you got a little creative with the positions, but I would have liked to see her put those psychic powers of hers to good use. Maybe that's something you can squeeze in later. Looking forward to seeing how you bring it all together in the end. Keep up the awesome work, my friend! This was another enjoyable read.

MarvelMaster616
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From Shadow-Of-The-Guardian on July 23, 2014
Having Julia Carpenter part of the growing harem is definitely adding a element that could work greatly in Peter's favor. Or set in motion events that could all blow up in Peter's face. The fact that she's now there does add an element of surprise which is ironic in the fact this woman can see the future.

I did have a thought about what would happen when you stated in the last chapter of Julia being the next woman. What I wondered is if a woman can see into the future that shows her having, in her own words, great sex with a man, will she do more after seeing what has happened or go with the flow? That also opens the possibility better should she want to go in a three way with some of the women the psychic knows. Julia knows Jen and has seen a bit of what She-Hulk is into will it be possible in the near future, no pun intended, that Julia might become a little more adventurous?

On a different note, will Aphrodite came back to see what her boy toy Peter Parker has been up to? I know you've told that she has a mystic connection with him due to her spell, but maybe a more personal touch soon.
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From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2014
Fun story sofar. But you do realise Anya is like 17 at most ATM :)
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From Ryvius on July 22, 2014
Awesome chapter! I was hoping to see Julia in this at some point. She's a unique addition to the women Peter has so far, both as Madam Web and as a single mom.

Keep up the good work!
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From BonesMcSkeleton on June 07, 2014
Really enjoy your story can't wait for your next chapter. Was wondering how often you post new chapters? Also, saw on your forum that you're having problems finding issues with Spider-Man and Jessica Drew inter acting well they fight together against Mandrill and Griffin in New Avengers #61 or #62, and I am sure other New Avenger issues would be a good place to look if this fight does not help.

Also it would be interesting to see X-23 in the mix, which would not be that hard to work in since after the Uni-Power problem involving her, Spider-Man and Sue Storm she babysits Sue's kids. So you could have Spider-Man show up at the Baxter Building while X-23 is there babysitting just a thought.

Again really enjoy the story, and can't wait for the next update.
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From ANON - CroniklerX on May 08, 2014
First off, let me say sorry for taking this long to reply to you back, I don't usually use my gmail account- sometimes even forgetting I have that account entirely- so I completely neglected the fact that you might have contacted me there instead of my fanfiction.net account, which I assumed was where you were going to reply, so I was actually waiting for your reply on my fanfiction.net account... That's actually kinda funny once you think about it. Still, sorry for making you wait as much as I was.

Anyway, I like the lineup for Spidey's Harem, especially Madame Web and Spider-Girl. Though I have to ask, what exactly's the limit for the number of women Spidey's gonna be with? Or if their's a limit at all? And how would you feel about adding the goddess Hebe to Spider-Man's Harem? I think that there was a lot of chemistry between her and Peter when they interacted with each other, and even though I know she's Hercules' wife and how you feel about married women being with Spidey, I just think it was awful on how Hercules treated her. I mean, they were already married and yet Hercules was still flirting and sleeping with other women behind her back (I think). Plus, I don't think they're even together anymore, I could be wrong but didn't they already get a divorce (or at the very least separate)? And Aphrodite could also just bring them together out of sympathy for a fellow god and woman whose marriage didn't work out either. Oh, and by the way, I actually heard that Spider-Woman had a brief relationship with Spider-Man once. I'm not sure if it's true or not but that might help with adding her to his Harem. Y'know, old feelings of a former lover and all that.

By the way, The Mercenary chapter was good, and I can somewhat see the real Silver Sable being the dominant one in relationships.

And The Superior Spider-Man comic isn't all that bad, it's actually pretty entertaining. At least to me it is. I mean, It just seems like a fresh and new idea to put a villain's mind in a hero's body and make it a series, I don't think anyone's ever done that before in a comic. Sure there's the usual mindswap between a hero and a villain that's bound to happen in a series, but this one was different since instead of reswapping their minds back together at the end of one or two issues, this one went on for over twenty-eight issues, roughly about one year in real time, and Peter had to get his body back in another kind of way. It was nice change of pace from the usual, occasionally stereotypical, comicbook storylines. Plus it's already over, being replaced by the relaunching The Amazing Spider-Man comic, which is very good from what I've heard.

Well, that's all I have to say for now. Oh, I almost forgot, could you do me a favor and contact me on my FF account instead of my gmail account from now on? It'd be a lot easier for both of us. Thanks.

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From marvelmaster616 on May 08, 2014
Really enjoyed this chapter. I'm glad you managed to work in a little bondage. I can definitely see Sable being into that. She's always very much in control of her work, her plans, and her team. It's part of what makes her so good at her job. So it makes sense that she would have a taste for bondage. But the scene with Rogue in the beginning was fun too. I actually enjoyed that a little more. The idea of them waking up together and having a nice romp in the shower was well-done. A bit surprised Rogue isn't into anal. Given her history with Gambit and her resilience, I thought she would at least be comfortable with it. Maybe for a future issue. lol And glad to see Aphordite show up in the end. Hope she gets to play a more active role soon. She hasn't really gotten much action it seems. Can't wait to see more. Keep up the great work, my friend.

MarvelMaster616
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From ANON - gig on May 07, 2014
That Pretty Woman reference was apropos.

It was interesting that you started off with Rogue as a prelude. The sex scene was nice but Peter having a little momentary crisis on confiding was a great segue into the build up for Silver Sable.

Maybe it doesn't need to be said but I'll say it anyway: you hit all the right notes with how the day progressed for borh Peter and Sable. Using symbolic control to build trust was inspired and depicting Silver as a closet romantic under an intimate setting while keeping her emotions in check in public was inspirational.

Looking forward to the Julia Carpenter chapter. :)
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From ANON - CroniklerX on April 06, 2014
Hey, Croniklerx again. Sorry about PMing you on the other site instead of this one, but a few months back I had a small problem with my Email account. I'm not sure if it was a hacker or not but it happened right after I sent my mail to this quiz site so I could get my results.

... I don't really want to talk about it. But since then, I haven't been too keen on sharing my Email address with websites if I could help it. But since you prefer me reviewing you on this site rather than PMing you on fanfiction.net, I guess it's okay...

Anyway, I wanted to ask you, how many women is Spider-Man gonna end up with? I hope it's a lot, poor petey's already had enough to deal with. With Doc Ock ruining his life, alienating his friends and family, letting the Goblin King take over ans all that in The Superior Spider-Man, he definately deserves a break y'know?

... Even if it is in just a fanfiction... Still, I do hope Peter gets at least a dozen girls to love him. (Though that might be pushing it, but hey, go big or go home right?)
This is just a really good idea for a story, I can totally see it happen in canon. Plus, there are so many possibilities to this story, you could make a sequel, a spinoff, an alternate universe fanfic about it, the possibilities are endless!

... Sorry about getting too excited, but you don't know how much of a relief for me it is to find a good Spider-Man Harem story that's still ongoing and has has actually updated within a year. Let me know the girls you have in mind for Spidey's Harem. But if it's okay with you, can you PM me in my fanfiction.net account? I, um, don't really have an account on adult-fanfiction.org, ( as embarrassing as that is) thanks.

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From Shadow-Of-The-Guardian on March 16, 2014
Considering all the women that Peter had been with at the time, I can understand the types of concerns he would have at the moment especially with his track record in the relationship department. The conversation that Peter had with Jen (She-Hulk) was definitely the thing Peter needed to understand that even though he has some concerns with having sex-only relationships with several women, there's a reason why the old saying of 'looking a gift horse in the mouth' has been around for a long time. There will come a time when Peter will have to dealt with the consequences of all the fun he's had with the women and now he knows that worrying about it doesn't help matters. Of course, with Aphrodite around, I doubt Peter would really be effected by worries he had before. With both the Love Goddess' spell and the already attraction between Peter and some of the women, Peter would still have his concerns but they wouldn't be foremost on his mind when whatever happens between a man and a woman.

So, we now know that the Love Goddess is rather mischievous and will cause love to happen no matter who she's near. I definitely enjoyed the part with Sue and Reed. If it wasn't for the fact they already had kids, I swear those two never really had sex considering Reed's all brain and barely any passion at times. Oh, and I liked how you made mention that Sue is the definition of the term MILF. Out of all the Marvel Women that are hot and mothers, have to say she's at the top of that list. I'm more curious than ever to find out what Peter will now do because of the pep talk Jen had given. I mean, she basically told a guy he's got a free pass with beautiful women.

Anyone striking that kind of treasure would be crazy to bury it again right after finding like Peter has.
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From ANON - Harbinger of Kaos on March 04, 2014
I read your latest chapter for your story on and saw that end comment, I don't know why but I felt compelled to speak to you on this site for some reason, I will understand if you prefer to have this on the other site.

The way I figure if you want Emma there's two ways you can play it:

1) After the events of Dark Reign she and Scott have a falling out she leaves and during a random venture through New York she bumps into him. You could have them share a history where he was a true friend to her in college before she ran with the HC and after the thing with her Professor went sour when he found out she was a mutant, they talk and she feels that she owes him for that kindness he showed her then and now as he speaks to her regardless of her past or actions.

2) Again there is a fallout but after Schism where she chooses to leave for the school because she wants to teach not keep fighting, now in reverse of the kids from Jean Grey School visiting Horizon he comes per Hank's request and they run into one another and again shared past and hook up ensues.

If you feel like you can't get them together you could always leave that as a one shot...maybe have her, Firestar and him hook up or something.

I would like to offer a substitute for Emma and I say this because of a recent comic I saw that may work well with this (that is if you feel it works) and that person is Elizabeth Braddock AKA Psylocke. I figure she and him have the same problem, the loss of love, I mean she lost Warren and Fantomex and her didn't work out while she can't seem to adapt in Logan's school very well, so the way I see it she goes out to unwind and runs into him as Spider-man and given that he never saw if she was okay after their past run-in in the comic he would see she looks down, talk to her and well dot dot dot.

As far as Jessica Drew, well there is a certain rapport between them when you take into account how he welcomed her openly after the Invasion and helped her when the Mandrill controlled her so I can see why folks want to see her. Though you said Spider THEMED not powered...does that mean Natasha will take part in this? Because aside from Jessica and Julia (which makes me curious how you will make that work) the only other women I can think of are Mattie Franklin and Charlotte Witter.

But that is for the future, thank you for your time and for making that interesting read, you at least take time to have some story instead of making some cheap screw fest and I respect that.

I wish you the best of luck in your endeavors...Peace!
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