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Reviews for A Spider and A She-Elf

By : AgentGv01
  • From Shadow-Of-The-Guardian on September 22, 2012
    Definitely an interesting pairing from an alternate version of the X-Men. Found a pic of what a Nightcrawler-version of Rogue looks like and gotta say, I can see Rogue going at it with her new body and found the comic where Rogue was about to kiss Spider-Man and does ask 'What If' had Rogue got to chance to go through with it. Wouldn't mind seeing a kind of epilogue for the story, to see if Rogue and Spider-Man continued their relationship and what if possibly had a child together. But overall, still damn good one-shot.
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  • From ANON - DST on September 04, 2012
    Great story. Would gladly read more if you wrote more.
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  • From marvelmaster616 on September 03, 2012
    I've been looking forward to this, my friend. I really didn't care for X-men Forever, but I really liked Rogue's new Nightcrawler look. I also liked the chemistry they gave her and Spider-Man in that one issue. It's a shame they didn't explore it more in the series, but you more than made up for it with this scene. lol I think it makes sense that Rogue would want to experience a little intimacy after being cut off for so long. And like I said, she and Peter already had chemistry. For all she knew, this transformation was only temporary. And since Peter was single at the time, why not? For all the crazy things he sees, I think he would be intrigued by a woman like Rogue with her Nightcrawler look. lol And as always, you give extra detail to all those little moments for a woman's first time. You got everything down to how Rogue gets her uniform off. Plus, I like how you had Peter warm her up so to speak before the big moment. I think she needed it and it definitely paid off. lol It would have been interesting to see how these two would have panned out in the context of X-men Forever, but for now your story more than suffices. Great job, my friend! Keep up the excellent work and I look forward to whatever you have in store next. Until next time, take care and best wishes, my friend!

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