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Reviews for Spider's Web Trilogy - The Spider's Bite

By : Shadow-Of-The-Guardian
  • From marvelmaster616 on August 19, 2012
    I've really been looking forward to this story. Agent-G told me about it a while back. I love the concept. It actually does play off some of the elements hinted at in the comic. Oz did have some very different effects on Peter's clones so it makes sense that it would have different effects on others. Him having retractable fangs to inject Oz like a spider is a nice touch. It's subtle, creative, and makes for a very hot moment. lol In addition to the concept, you did a great job detailing the sex scene. I've seen one too many stories were such details are glossed over. You did a great job with the descriptions and what not. It was nice and vivid, which always helps to make it more enjoyable. Personally, I like how this turned out better than when Aunt May interrupted them in the comics. lol And now that MJ has a heavy dose of Oz in her, I look forward to seeing the effects. She turned into quite a creature in the Clone Saga. It'll be interesting to see what she does here. It'll also be interesting to see what happens when Peter starts biting other girls. I was a huge fan of Agent-G's Dark Urges so I'm glad a story like this has come along. Keep up the excellent work! I look forward to the next chapter. Until next time, take care and best wishes.

    MarvelMaster616
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  • From AgentGv01 on August 19, 2012
    Well glad you got this back up and I hope your account won't get hacked again. Like I said before this was a good start to things, the first scene set up the new slightly AU additional power Peter has in this (which is kind of like Spider-Man 2099 had venom teeth too) and I do like that you started it off with the scene of Peter telling MJ his secret. That was always one of my fav parts of the comics and I like this version you did as well. I look forward to more and how they deal with it. I mean will it pick up right where you left off with him kind of wondering how things got out of hand so quickly and other stuff like that.
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