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Reviews for Mortal Plaything

By : Portmanteu
  • From Mistressofrave on May 10, 2013
    NOOOO it can't stop there! It just can't! If there isn't a continuation i think i will just cry.

    But seriously, amazingly done :)

    ~Mistress
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  • From ANON - Jess on September 20, 2012
    Very interesting story, quite enjoyed it. Have you considered switching it to present tense? Some of the tenses are present but most of them are past tense, the story would probably read smoother if they were all the same and (in my opinion, as a proffessional writing student) present tense would work better for the story.

    By the way, if you needed help with that just email me back. I'm always happy to get some editing practice in :)
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  • From ANON - Bonny on August 05, 2012
    This is the best ever!!! I thought it would have been more towards thor but it went in loki direction. Totall loki fan thank you so much. I loved it keep writin more. ;3
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