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Reviews for New Blood III: Triumph of Darkness

By : marvelmaster616
  • From ANON - Daye on August 15, 2009
    Oh my stars and garters...

    Interesting chapter. I look forward to more. I hope X23 and lorna will eventually be redeemed. They've not done anything evil thus far. If he's anything like canon, Beast should have been plenty strong. Although if he's only been labbing it up with Sinsiter all these years then he's wont have canon Beast's fighting skills.
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  • From ANON - Daye on August 08, 2009
    ha! Well you certainly showed me. In true comic book style they weren't dead after all. In a way its a pity, Xavier actually biting it could have been just as interesting. Still looking forward to this continuing. Xavier's going to have to pull some serious mojo. Whoi's actually in command of the Hellfire club at the moment? Is Xavier just got his loyal pawns or will he be able to control the chunks of the club, Selene isn't in direct command of?
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  • From Ratdogtwo on August 08, 2009
    really twist change of events competly forgot about how powerful dani could be. i xcant wait to read more keep up the the awsome work
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  • From Ratdogtwo on August 02, 2009
    o Crap is all i c an say keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Daye on August 02, 2009
    First; Something that really bugs me; its Shinobi Shaw, and James Proudstar, with an 'i' and a 'r' not Shanobi and Poundstar. (though the latter does fit his character rather well)

    On this chapter; Xavier doesn't keep Cerebro (sorry Cerebrum!)locked up and isolated from tampering? Really? He knows he has enemies, even within the Club and yet he doesn't have a system to make sure his most important piece of equipment is unbooby tapped? I suppose with magneto on the loose, his anxiety could have overwelhemed his paranoia and common sense but still... Xavier just went down like a punk.

    Oh and you killed Dani as well, so much for Xavier' ace in the hole and also that nice Sam/Dani pairing you seemed to be working towards in new Blood II. Which is a pity. Although I do like the dynamic you have between Julian and X23. Whicj I'd quite like to see advanced so x23 starts to get what love is. I'm also wondering whether Selene's minions that are more enchanted than willing are going to get redeemed at any point. Like Kurt and Alex who I liked when they first appeared. Kurt especially as been much less interesting since he got cursed.

    I sense lots of kinky torture sex coming up, perhaps?
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  • From Ratdogtwo on July 25, 2009
    you completely runen the story
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  • From Ratdogtwo on July 18, 2009
    ANOTHER AMAZING AWSOME CHAPTER. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK
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  • From Ratdogtwo on July 11, 2009
    ANOTHER AWSOME CHAPTER KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
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  • From Psyknight on July 04, 2009
    I'm liking this story. I love your inclusion of Psylocke.
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  • From Ratdogtwo on July 04, 2009
    another amazing chapter can start to see the pices fall into place. keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - Harry M VanHoudnos on July 03, 2009
    What a HOT chapter! I could SEE Jean and Logan going at it! And I understand why Jean did it.
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  • From Ratdogtwo on June 27, 2009
    I SORT OF SAW THE OUT COME OF THE SCOOT EMMA THING COMEING. GREAT CHAPTER KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 27, 2009
    I dont really like this. Auhor doesnt know mch about Emma/Scott a d Jean/Scott. Plus, this whole thing is really sexist. And the author basically gary stus the characters. Maybe a horny 12 year old boy would like this fic though. :)
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  • From Ratdogtwo on June 20, 2009
    well i can say i dint see the black queen comeing up with the plain to attack xavior. anyway great chapter keep up the good work.
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  • From Ratdogtwo on June 13, 2009
    Intersting turn of events. Cant wait to see what charles reaction will be not only did slenia disaoby him but now he has proffe thats she up to something becouse of the tape. grest chspter keep up the good work
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