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Reviews for To The Victor...

By : Nathalia
  • From ChosenOne44 on August 11, 2019

    Interesting story you have here. Hope you will have more chapters in the future soon since this story is getting good. Keep up the good work! Hope to see more chapters in the near future soon!😁


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  • From xBlackWolfx on December 09, 2009
    i like this, too bad you may never continue it. if you do, i'd like to see them to try and 'discipline' boom-boom.
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  • From ANON - Buffalo on June 10, 2009
    What a fantastic story, not only does it have a clever plot which only makes the sex scenes more poingnant. the story is well written gramattically. I am lokking forward to more great work in the future
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  • From GrimLegion on September 19, 2007
    You asked for a review so here it is. The story is good. I especially like the first few chapters. However the female brotherhood characters dont seem to make a lot of since. Unless maybe theyre all being mind controlled which would explain rouges headaches. I didnt care for the xmen side story with the horny drug. And while I like the way you describe the sex scenes. Some are hard to imagine. Probably because theyre physically impossible. Oh and whats with nightcrawler hes a good guy and then boom he just rapes another girl. and you dont explain why lance is sharing her. there relationship was the cornerstone of your story. All and all its a good story though plot points just always make my head hurt. If you want a way to fix it id bring in mastermind as a central villain. Make it so hes been the puppet master of mind alterations of everyone even mystique. magneto wanted him to force loyalty. But after a while the strain of his abilities begin to drive him mad. and those he influences have suffered from that same madness.

    So there you are my humble opinion as asked for along with a few suggestions, also asked for. Take them if you wish. But its your story so fell free to tell me to go to hell. Ill keep reading ether way.

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  • From ANON - Jaina12 on August 31, 2007
    I'm totally addicted to your story. I'm probably the one hitting it up everyday, just rereading the good parts.
    A few questions about chapter 9 though. Did Mastermind wipe some of Jean and Amara's memories or are they not telling the X-Men about the rapes? Because if they told Wolverine about it and Kitty was still in there I'm sure he'd want to kill all of the Brotherhood. Also, do Jean, Amara and Kitty still have the collars on so that they can't use their powers? It seems like Amara and Jean's are off, but is Kitty's still on?
    I can't wait for more! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - molace on August 28, 2007
    This is the best story i have read on aff.net. Could you make the BHood boys fuck Jubilee, Tabitha and especially Storm.
    I 'm looking for a Storm/Avalanche for years.
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  • From ANON - molace on August 28, 2007
    This is the best x-men evo story i have read on sff.net. Could you make the Bhood guys fuck Jubilee, Tabitha, and especially Storm too. I'm looking for a Storm/Avalanche story for years.
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  • From ANON - Jaina12 on August 27, 2007
    I love your story. It is written beautifully and I can't wait to read more. Please continue to post!
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  • From Ginevrasn on August 24, 2007
    I think the reason no one is reviewing is that this piece is quite dark and shocking...but we're reading it aren't we?

    I am enjoying this piece, though it could use some work, especially on characterization. But it is pretty much AU.

    The Rahne I'm familiar with would have gotten herself killed trying to help the other girls and would have never accepted a position with the Brotherhood under those circumstances. And I can't see Rogue as being that callous. When she absorbs someone's powers, she becomes that person--she would have to be pretty darn cold to feel no compassion for the people she touches.

    All of the Brotherhood are a bit darker than I can believe, except for Mystique. But, like I said, I'm still reading and enjoying it.
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  • From ANON - kaleb on August 05, 2007
    awesome. would love to see some action with storm...as wella s magnetos acolytes joining in if possible.
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  • From ANON - kaleb on July 28, 2007
    awesome story. looking forward to seeing more...especially on the lance/kitty front.
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  • From ANON - kaleb on July 18, 2007
    cool story. i'd like to see more on the kitty/lance front if possible. im not sure where you're going with recuing the x-men though since it would probably lea to the rescue of those captured by the brotherhood. anyhoo...keep going...great story so far
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  • From Masterdudemind on July 16, 2007
    Glad to see this story back. I've enjoyed the reworked version that you've put up.

    However, I do hope that you avoid the pitfalls that this series had before. Rather than going lighter and lighter, I think this series would be better served by going to the dark side and staying there. Instead of Rogue convincing Rahne to join, have them rape her into submission. Have Pyro and Sabretooth visit the boarding house and have their way with the girls. You've started off dark, so why not stay there? Just my suggestion, take it fir what it's worth.
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