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Reviews for Witness

By : Ginevrasn
  • From ANON - cherylnixon on August 20, 2013
    I loved this story so happy I stumbled upon it.
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  • From erisah on November 29, 2008
    I was impressed with how well you took a seemingly random idea structured around getting your OC to sleep with half the cast of Evolution, and then turned it into something that was actually quite readable. The tension you built up in the plot was fairly well sustained, although I must admit at one point I was all "oh look, *another* threesome. haven't seen much of that in this story" :rolleyes:.

    Still, I enjoyed this.
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  • From NicolinaN on May 23, 2008
    Holy... cow! I don't know where to start. O_O

    I've been reading your fic since the last five days, loosing sleep, being completely infatuated... At first I was in it for the sex... and then, by the time of the orgie at the party... I had grown bored with it and had since long been in it for the incredibly exciting plot. I have no relation at all to all these X-people... I've only watched the three movies and enjoyed them. I'm really a Wolverine girl, was... now I can't stop thinking of that Remy... *sighs*

    I LOVED the interaction between Riss and Remy when she was hostage. That was amazingly hot in so many ways, and NOT only sexual. You really made a person out of him, and a complex relationship between them. I'm glad you winked at that in your epilogue because I was a little depressed that they didn't end up together. I never thought they would... but still... And Faith and Hope... SO sweet! I'm a mother of twins myself. Thankfully not covered in gooey poison last time I checked... The pregnancy was hell nonetheless.

    Sabretooth... what to say? That was another part of the story that had me gasping for all sorts of reasons... I reacted strongly, and in scary ways, to his violence and primitiveness... and his wish to be more than what people see.

    I'm a little torn that she turned out to be a mutant as well... I don't know what to think of that. But I did start to think quite early on that she had amazing capabilities to manipulate and get people on her side and that that had to mean something... So I guess it makes sense somehow.

    The only closure I didn't get was what happened to Sabretooth, Victor. I'd have wanted that.

    And yes, good grief, you're truly a novelist now and I envy you! Congratulations on an amazing story! I just might have to re-read a few of my favorite chapters somewhere in the middle...

    Nicolina.

    Mainly posting at fanfiction.net http://www.fanfiction.net/u/832956/ Completely non-mutant stuff... ;)
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  • From ANON - landa on February 24, 2008
    I was kind of suprised that you didn't take advantage of Lance's mutant ability. He's a human vibrator. But other wise excellent chapter.
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  • From ladydeathfaerie on December 16, 2007
    holy crap. it was a marathon read.

    all i can say is most of it left me needy. i went
    to bed the past two nights, and probably tonight,
    wet.

    thanks.

    *hugs*

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on August 21, 2007
    awesome ending, but what happened to sabretooth?
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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on August 17, 2007
    awww Girls? coool...yay no more chip...i dont blame her i would want it out too!!!
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  • From ANON - tank on August 15, 2007
    oh god theres so much plot lol ! glad shits starting to get to normal. good shit.
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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on August 13, 2007
    awww im gonna cry!!! what exactly did wanda do to her either time?
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  • From ANON - tank on August 12, 2007
    lol yeah Remy stole my girl....bastard. Wow Wanda's a bit.....mental lol. Good shit !
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  • From ANON - Lemonique on August 11, 2007
    This was a very good chapter overall. I like that it was Todd-centric and the reveal that they're having twins.
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  • From CaptDavyJonesLover on August 11, 2007
    awww what a surprise...keep it up
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  • From ANON - tank on August 11, 2007
    sweet yeah suppose your right bout john. its just that Todd's taking a back seat and i hate Remy in this fic. its like a jock snatching a girl from a geek if you know what i mean lol. good chappie
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  • From ANON - tank on August 08, 2007
    more fred/angie i crave it ! still can't believe you made that work ^^
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  • From ANON - tank on August 08, 2007
    im sorry i haven't reviewed for ages ! been a bit busy with my own writing :) remember when this was a one shot ? i gotta say its blossomed well. I still feel that Marissa sucks but thats just me being narrow minded ;) when we going to have toad as the main sort of focus like in the early chappies ? and can you answer me this, does marrisa love toad, wanda, lance, Remy and john the same or is some just a sexual affection ? oh and also i feel that wanda is mean, but that is pretty accurate anyway so kudos !!!
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