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By : FightingMadness
  • From ANON - Melon on April 29, 2007
    Holy Hell I was dead and my computer crashed and I got a new one and it totally kicks ass and pantpantpant. D:

    Yes, unfortunately I wasn't able to comment on the last chapter because of my horrible absence, boo hoo. Allow me to supply my inferior review, embedded within being both critique and happiness abounds!

    Still grammar problems, and if I were a less lazy person I'd offer myself as a beta. On the other hand, my mentioning this makes me feel a tad bit unfeeling, and realize that I do understand how much work you must put into this story. n_n I can live with the grammar, unlike some. It doesn't affect my reading unless it makes the text completely illegible. This is when I get frustrated.

    Done with that. Strut forth to more important matters. OhmyGod, Kurt in a nightown. Do you have any idea of how excited this made me? Such a feat requires that he develop a blatant fetish for women's clothing--after he gets over his fear of brute men forcing him into said pieces. Wow. :D Scott does seem like Mr. Prince Charming, doesn't he? I'm impatient. MAKE SCOTT KICK SOME CROTCH AND SWEEP KURT AWAY. In the gown. Definitely in the gown.

    In my humble opinion, your gradual downplay on Kurt's jokes was spot-on. I hope he breaks. I hope his self-esteem shatters into tiny little specks on the floor. I hope he cuts his foot on the specks. I adore Kurt to no end, for he is one of my favorite characters (if not THE character to grasp my favoritism), but torture gets me off. So do men in dresses.

    Please put him in a dress again. And stab Blob in the gut with a leaf blower.

    My review sucks because I have had no sleep for 49 hours. Birds have laid eggs in my eyebags.

    OOOHOOO.

    With love. n_n
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  • From xireth on April 29, 2007
    Heheh. c: I don't really have anything against any of them, but... I think Sabretooth was the cruelest of them. SO. He should get the worst punishment. >D

    And I think any deaths should be more of an accident situation~. Like... Logan finds a gun [ maybe they had some locked up somewhere in a hutch or saftey box? ] and shoots at Scott when he's trying more hero-ism and it hits Fred instead. Or something. And maybe Marie can be the one to castrate Sabretooth. xD I think she'd find it fun after what they did.

    Then Logan should just be recaptured by the police and put up for the death penalty. o:! Some of Kurt's healing could be having to face him in court for a testimony~! ...Kay. Sorry, rambling. xD BUT. If you liked any of the ideas, you're obviously welcome to use them. ;D And you're welcome to contact me if you want more ideas or something. lmfao. HEART.
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  • From Vampircia on April 02, 2007
    "“I’m kind of tired, sex and blood loss tend to ware you out” Kurt joked “If you don’t mind, I’m taking a nap. Good night” He closed his eyes and rested his head on the wall before the other two could say anything."

    This part killed me. What? He's joking? Are you kidding me? No one would joke in a situation like that. Don't get me wrong, I like your story, it's interesting, but every time I read about Kurt being sarcastic it absolutely gets my goat. It's just plainly unrealistic. He would cry, he would beg, he would scream, he would be in a state of utter shock. People ususaly don't joke, when they're in such a state, you know? That's the only thing I really don't like it this fanfic. Just try to make characters behave in a more realistic way and it will be ok. Good luck.
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  • From xireth on March 18, 2007
    Oh oh! I have ideas!

    Blob should be killed, Sabertooth should be castrated and Logan just knocked out. 8D Lmfao.
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  • From xireth on March 07, 2007
    I don't normally like AU stories, but this is really interesting. xD

    Please keep going~

    ...why is it that people always like to torture their favourite characters? Haha.
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  • From chinohana on January 29, 2007
    This is awesome shit!!! update asap, i wanna see more Kurt-torture! CX I am sick as hell, but hey, Kurt-torture is the best!!!

    Long live Kurt-torture and U!! XD
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  • From ANON - Jewelled-Wolf on January 02, 2007
    Poor guy can't even get a break in the shower. :( Oh well, keep this amazing writing up! I can't wait for the next chapter. Just wondering if there are going to be anymore X-men characters showing up soon...
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  • From ANON - Paul on December 17, 2006
    oh it is so vary good of a story i love it so i cant wait for the next update... have agood one bye the way i like that chapter...
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  • From ANON - Myde on December 14, 2006
    I love the story! *pats Kurt's head* I'm sorry, sweetie! It's okay! I can't wait for more!
    ~Demyx~
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  • From ANON - ickybicky on December 14, 2006
    I am offially obsessed with this fic....and you just had to stop there...didn't you?
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  • From ANON - Jaden on December 11, 2006
    Wow, what a dark story. I can't say that I like the part about cutting off Kurts finger but I like your imagination when it comes to character development. Keep up the good work.

    J_
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  • From ANON - Melon on December 09, 2006
    What took you so long? Excuse the textual outburst. Now, I wish to give a few pointeroos. I've spotted several errors in this chapter, also. However, I'm sure you could easily find them. For instance, "Then" and "than" are two different words. Then indicates an add-on, such as "and then they died" or "I'm going to slice up your insides, then I'm going to make you drink it". That sort of deal. There were a few others. I'm deeply sorry for the criticism. I'M not perfect, no one is. A few grammatical and spelling errors, but I believe in you! Aside from that...

    Haha. Yes. Let your mind wander free among the mushrooms of imagination. Just don't eat them. They're poisonous! And wait. He lost a bloody FINGER? Dear God, that's gotta look unnaturally unsexy. Or maaaybe it just adds to his charm. And y'know what? I like gore and disgusting situations. It makes the story more interesting! Hooray for homosexual intercourse problems! "He had to take a dump". Ha. I almost thought Logan was going to go soft on Kurt. Until I realized that he was heating up a KNIFE. KNIFE! Yes, boys. Torture your little pet. Make him eat his own words and regret ever being conceived in the womb.

    I know authors dread and hate this statement, but update soon. Or I'll kill you. (:
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  • From ANON - Xeph on December 03, 2006
    I really liked your story, so far it was fun to read and it has Kurt in it. Okay, I could live without the torture stuff, but well, it is Kurt torture.
    You wrote that there will be Scott/Kurt, I'm a bit curious about, how you will make it happen. I have a few guesses, but they all seem kind of clichèd, but I have trust n you, that you have something interesting in your mind^^

    Maybe you'd like to replace "Halten sie an" with something else. 'Halten sie an" would be more fit, if Kurt were to ask Sabertooth to stop a car, or something like this, but to ask him not to do something (he's about to do) "Bitte nicht!" (Please don't) would be better. But this is just some random advise which you are free to ignore ^.^
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  • From ANON - Jewelled Wolf on December 01, 2006
    Noooo, Kurt! Update quickly....You need to save him!
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  • From ANON - Melon on December 01, 2006
    Excellent, then. Glad I could be of some service. Quite remarkably, at the same time I reached the portion describing the mutilation of Kurt's pinky, I was chewing on my own. My overwhelming sympathy caused me to dig my teeth into it just a bit too hard. On the other hand, I'm restless to find what creative ideas for torture you may have in store. Creativity just makes me happy. I also forgot to mention that the "Touchdown!" quip made me snicker. In glee! Imagined Blob contemplating picking Kurt up and throwing him to the ground. Like a good little football.

    Props to your own beta! G'day. :)
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