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Reviews for My husband and my best friend

By : jaymclg
  • From ANON - UraniaChang on November 28, 2006
    It's really not healthy for me to stare at my computer screen blushing all the time.:D (And there is still a two-week honeymoon! Wondering whether or not I'll have enough blood left after that.)
    And if Scott and Marie keep it up like that, there is no doubt their baby will be on the way soon enough!
    But if I were staying right next room to any married couple in the mansion, I'll definitely mark the reinforcement of my bedroom walls first thing on my to-do list!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 25, 2006
    it's good so far but Please UPDATE ASAP.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on November 21, 2006
    Not bad, but I was given the impression in the movies that Pyro can only control fire, not create it.
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  • From ANON - Ashnan on November 20, 2006
    Okay, I seriously hate Jean. I am a big Logan/Rogue fan. I'm not crazy about you breaking them up. I do like Scott. So the least you can do is make Logan and Jean come back and regret their actions and MAKE THEM SUFFER!

    I love this story, by the way.
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  • From ANON - Linda on November 19, 2006
    This is such a great story and I am looking foward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on November 19, 2006
    Um, this needs a little work. I know that the wedding is part of the story, but was it really important for the story to know every little detail of the dresses and them picking them out? Also, watch out for redundancies. A door that is slightly open is ajar, you don't need to say 'open ajar'. If you have comments that you want to tell the readers that aren't part of the story, the things with John, Bobby, Kitty and Jubilee, please put them in an Author's Notes section at the begining or the end of the chapter, not in the middle of it. It disrupts the flow of the story when you do that. I know this isn't what you're looking for in a review, but I'm trying to help you become a better writer.
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  • From ANON - katie on November 16, 2006
    Please UPDATE ASAP
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on November 15, 2006
    It's still an interesting story, but I kind of wonder why you cut it off where you did.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on November 09, 2006
    This is pretty good and an original idea as far as I can tell. I don't know enough about the comics to know how close you are to getting the characters right. You might want to rewrite that first sentence, though. It's a bit odd.
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