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  • From theapocalypse451 on January 27, 2010
    The storyline itself is good, but the grammar and punctuation is really bad so its really hard to follow. With a little more revision, it could be a very good story.
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  • From MissEmie on June 12, 2008
    You know what dude I like this story too!
    So get off your high horse and update...
    Writers don't write for anybody else but themselves
    and those few who understand.
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  • From Tarafina on November 12, 2007
    It's good, but the chapters are incredibly short, so it's sort of hard to get into it. I look forward to reading more though!@
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  • From Denu on August 09, 2007
    Hi!
    I like your story, and I wanted to tel you taht you shouldn't feel bad about people don't reviewing.
    Most people never review, I know I only do it when extremely necessary!
    I write X-men fics as well, I've started 2 and wrote other 2 oneshots, and in total I think I had 3 reviews.
    More or less revioews won't makje your story better, and it certainly shouldn't let you down! People simply don't think about writting.
    If you feel like writting, then write, no matter how many reviews, hits or votes you get ;)
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  • From Emmylovedraco on April 24, 2007
    Women' You need to update soon I like your story and if you don't update soon I'm going to go crazy lol. hehehe' No Please Write more pleaseeesaee!
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  • From TheShadowCat on March 14, 2007
    First off, getting reviews around here is like pulling teeth, so threatening not to update unless you get 5 new reviews is setting yourself up for a lot of heartache. Demanding one should be enough and if you update on a regular basis, have an actual plot and write the story well, the reviews should start coming in a bit more regularly.

    Ok, time for the constructive criticism. You need to pick if you're going to write this in first person or third person. Switching back and forth is confusing and annoying. You stated that you're looking for a beta, that will help a lot. Sorry, I'm not offering. I'm working on 4 stories of my own and don't have time to work on someone elses. Good luck and I hope this helped.
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  • From on February 03, 2007
    update pls,never thought i'd be lookin' forward to someones bad day, hehe. i think the reviews have t do w/ the section of the site. been a while since the x-men hype so not a lot fics or reviews here. it's also probably your not allowing anonymous reviews, most of the ppl here dont have accounts. got get down, i'll b keepin' an eye out 4 the next chapter. ^.^x
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  • From ANON - kirsten on January 12, 2007
    if it helps i liked your story
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  • From ANON - lightnin' on December 11, 2006
    Please please write more! Nothing really to say except mm, pyro.
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  • From ANON - kylie on December 11, 2006
    I'm in love with this story...I check everyday to see if you've posted more...I'm dying here! I need more soon lol...it's really good you should keep going.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2006
    you should keep writing chapters, its a good story and needs a chance to develop.
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  • From ANON - Abby on December 06, 2006
    I really like the story and I think that you should post more no matter how many reviews you get.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 05, 2006
    good story, would like you to write a lot more and develop the romance or smut. its a good pairing that needs to be explored more
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  • From ANON - JF on November 18, 2006
    I like this. love it. i would love to see more.PLEASE?
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  • From ANON - Steph on November 17, 2006
    I like it!! It's a pair that really didn't even cross my mind. Going to go on with the story or is that it?!

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