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Reviews for Reformed Sinner or Expecting the unexpected

By : EleniD
  • From ANON - Windkaizer on November 07, 2006
    Love chap 12! You can have your ham back now! Love ya! Oh, and if you want to have some help making a sequel to this story, talk to me! I would love to help. (Ok, it's really because all four of these guys are hot as hell! And I love anything with them in it ((well, not the hetero stuff)) Also, I want you to read my story. I just posted it up on the 6th! Tell me what you think!
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  • From ANON - Gimpy on November 07, 2006
    Your right I never thought about it that way, the poor life as a percervative.
    *Does little Happy Dance*
    I didn't think I would like a 'nice' Creed but I do, and poor Hank, I love and angsty Hank. And will somebody please kick Scott in the balls, he really needs to shut up. Please write more. Please Please Please
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  • From ANON - Ingonyama on November 07, 2006
    On Chapter 6 - WOW!

    I will say this much, Charley sure knows how to get to the heart of a problem. It's absolutely mind-boggling that, as powerful as he is, there's still all that unresolved sexual tension flying around the Institute.
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  • From ANON - Windkaizer on November 06, 2006
    Hating you for ending the story like this. Now you gets no ham!
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  • From ANON - Lina on November 05, 2006
    OMG!! THE DRAMA!!!! ::feints:: it's just..... TOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Gimpy on November 05, 2006
    Yeah more cuteness. I love Logan and Victor together and the midget comment. And the poor jam, I guess life as a perservitive was just to much for it to take. Love the story
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  • From ANON - Chicken on November 05, 2006
    Oh, ok...are we gonna get into a cut-off war 'round here? Are you gonna force me to retaliate for this by leaving my next chapter hanging? *grins*

    Still doin' a damn good job with this K...Creed is actually sweet. Now I feel bad for what's gonna happen to him. Logan's actions and motives are totally believable, the guy couldn't get the start of a relationship right even if someone else tried to start it FOR him.

    Again, love what you're doin' here. Yer crankin' these bad boys out like free condoms at clinic. Great job.

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  • From Dendey on November 05, 2006
    LOL!!! 'Wolves don't purr!' Yeah, as if! But you wanna know my favorite line of that chap? 'Shut up McCoy!' That sooooo did the trick! Why do you even ask for advice? You truly don't need it, believe me! You just know what to do! Allright, so Kurt's talk with Victor was initially a bit unexpected and a little awkward, but the out-come of it was magnificent!
    I'm still too stunned and a little overwhelmed from the smut-amout in the last two chapters...that I barely know what to say. But you did make Wolverine pull quite a stunt on Hank. I liked his persistence, he is like that, stubborn as hell if he knows what he wants...or thinks he does! ^_~ Hank reacted absolutely adoreably to him and I really liked how you projected their minds nervousness onto their bodies, like Hanks twitching ear. That was really good and it also showed how aware Logan is of his surroundings, anytime whether be it night or day.
    How you made Logan relax! WOW! Just Wow! It shows how much he trusts Hank and how unconditionally he trusts Beasts judgement.
    I like how you make Victor seem vulnerable, but you shouldn't forget that he probably needs to school his features when dealing with anyone else besides Kurt and the other two...but considering his rivalry with Wolvie he'll probably try to act around him too...I think deep down he's a bit like Hank, secretive about his needs especially. But the main difference is that Victor just takes what he thinks he(his body...AND his egoistical mind-set) needs, whereas Hank tries to deny himself anything related to his physical needs. Hank will give, because he's a generous person, Victor would give just as little as possible so that he can get something he craves in return. At least I think so...now it really is up to you what to do with the lot of them in the next chappie! I'm gonna check my e-mails now...who know's what might be waiting for me! ^___^
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  • From ANON - Gimpy on November 04, 2006
    Claps, so cute. I love Hank, always caring about other people first, and poor him for thinking that he is a subsitute. I actually like Logan as a sub, it is cute. And Victor and Kurt are so cute.
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  • From ANON - Lina on November 04, 2006
    OMG!!!!! STEAMINESS!!!! Will victor and doc get together??? I feel so bad so doc, all alone in a cold bed with nothing but his hand to warm him ::sigh:: it's sad to be so blue!!
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  • From Dendey on November 02, 2006
    Awww! I don't believe it! They can be sooo sweet if they just want to!
    Great chapter oh worshipable godess!
    Just see what you get up to when I'm not there for a week! You post a new story and don't tell me! That's not nice, ya know? I've got to say this though...I love it! It's just a tidbit too central with Kurt. Apparently all three of them want a piece of the fuzzy blue dude, but what about each other? Allright you actually hinted at the answer of that question with the end of Chapter eight, the hug! But what about Beast? Is he just going to join in to get what he wants(Kurt) or is there more? If so...please fill me in! I'm dying to read his motivations! I know you always construct complex and difficult mindsets behind Hank's actions but so far...I'm afraid his part compared to the whole story was a bit...small? Not that he wasn't there enough...he actually was quite a constant prescence and I like that, but his thoughts were mostly left out. You were usually focusing on Kurt or Victor...I don't think there's been a part between just Logan and Hank yet...and the breakfast doesn't count, obviously.
    So you see, I've been thinking about your plot-development quite a lot and I've got to say, so far I like it. Especially the end of chapter six! That was a hint that Charles is playing matchmaker, am I right?
    Well, just get on with it asap and...thanks sooooo much for the very first authors note of your story...I am touched, flattered and just generally bouncing with joy!
    Dendey
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  • From ANON - Gimpy on November 01, 2006
    I liked that 'fight scene.' and Poor Hank, though I like it when the world just keep shitty on them. Sorry I'm an idiot, didn't get the fact that it was a dream until I reread the chapter, sorry.
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  • From ANON - Chicken on November 01, 2006
    *Confetti flutter* Yay! Someone else with the "Logan can be a sub" notion! *Confetti flutter* Now my idea stinks. *Pouts*

    These chapters were both sweet. I love how...loving...Hank can be. And poor Kurt. Kid can barely catch a break. It's sad how the one you want is always hardest to get.
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  • From ANON - Lina on November 01, 2006
    Love the chapter!!!! Ahhh... the drama!! Our poor characters!!!
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  • From ANON - Lina on October 30, 2006
    OMG!!!! KD, you're back!!!!! ::HUGS AND KISSESS:: Once again, as I've said 100 times, brilliant as always!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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