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Reviews for Playboy X

By : marvelmaster616
  • From ANON - Demos on November 26, 2006
    Proceeding quite well. I'm impressed by the variety you've managed to generate in a genre that seems almost stuffed with cliche relationships. Magma vs Sunspot was an exspecialy nice thought.
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  • From ANON - Crystal on November 18, 2006
    oooh, that was hot!!! and i can't wait to see some more. and i also wanna see more jott smut!!!
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  • From ANON - Crystal on November 14, 2006
    that was a great chapter and a nice moment between bobby & jubilee and Ray, Tabby and Sam. i can't wait to read the next chapter and i hope you read my new fic on ff.net called "Past, Present and Future" it's a movie verse kinda AU plus, it's a JOTT!
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  • From ANON - Wen on November 11, 2006
    I rather like your first fics cos the 2 lasted ones are touching some disturbing subjects for me.
    Now I know that I don't like Scott and Jean being exibitionist.
    There, I can't imagine Scott and Jean posing for playboy cos:
    It would be immature, it's pure exibisionism as it's not even because of a need of money. It would be dangerous for other mutants, until then they were safe in the street from sexual assault cos they were "freaks", if the men saw the women mutants as Jean it won't be the same. They are adults and teachers, what an exemple they do. Knowing that the others fantasm on them and the fact that they have picture of them naked and provokating is totally different etc etc etc
    But, I guess some people like it and that's your fic, I just wanted you to now why I wasn't reviewing since your last long fic
    I'll wait for a classical one ;)

    Wen
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  • From ANON - Amy on November 05, 2006
    I can't wait until you do Logan/Ororo
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  • From ANON - Miss Madhatter on November 05, 2006
    Wow this story is great I just hope everyone else gets to be in playboy now that would be cool. THsi schools startinh to look like a porno shoot and I love it. Keep up the good work babe.
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  • From ANON - TVO on November 04, 2006
    I'm a bit confused about Chapter 4.

    You said Rogue can't touch anyone, but how was she able to do that with Warren then? And if she needed the real thing instead of a vibrator, why didn't she go all the way with Warren?

    Just hoping you can clarify that.

    Either way, the scenes were really hot and well done. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - alrischa on October 29, 2006
    LOL! I'd like to own my own copies of those magazines! ;p
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  • From ANON - Crystal on October 29, 2006
    Man, that was a great chapter. My jaw did drop. where can i get a copy of that playgirl issue? haha, j/k.
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  • From ANON - alrischa on October 23, 2006
    LOL! A fun, amusing chapter. ;)
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  • From ANON - Crystal on October 22, 2006
    wow, that was a hell of a photoshoot for playboy and playgirl magazines. and i can't wait to read the others' reactions after seeing the pictures on the magazine that bobby got. update soon, slick. and talk to you later.
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  • From ANON - SyJen on October 21, 2006
    Sorry for posting over you I had to fix something that was bugging the crap out of me. Please repost. SyJen
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  • From ANON - alrischa on October 16, 2006
    Scott and Jean in Playboy? Damn, that's gonna be hot! ;)
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  • From ANON - unimpressed on October 16, 2006
    Y'know, I've read several of your fics here, and they read like really, really bad porn. Like, REALLY bad. I love smut, but this? Just... painful, dude.

    It's obvious to anyone who has ever had sex that you definitely haven't - ever. Not even close. You don't know what you're talking about. You don't know the biology. It's a joke, really. (First hint - girls don't ejaculate when they orgasm. There is no "shooting of juices", or whatever. Duh.) You've obviously just read other bad porn and picked up your "knowledge" that way.

    And the dialogue DURING sex? NOBODY talks like that. It's hilarious. Painful, but hilarious.

    Seriously, dude, give up the smut, and go keep plagiarising other writers on fanfic.net. That's what you're best at.
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  • From ANON - Demos on October 16, 2006
    An excelent start. Curious how matters will play out.
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