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Reviews for A Night in Jubilation

By : Amadea
  • From Psyknight on October 21, 2007
    I love this fanfic! I've read it a dozen times. I love how Jubilee is in giddy schoolgirl-like awe of Remy.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on October 21, 2006
    Nice piece of smut you've got there, but I do have a few little problems. You keep switching your verb usage from past to present tense and back again. You need to pick one and stick to it. You also have a few correctly spelled, but improperly used words. I believe she wanted to 'massage' his sack, not message them. I know it's common practice now, but starting a sentance with the word 'and' shouldn't be done. But like I said, nice smut.
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