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Reviews for Eye of the Beholder

By : TheShadowCat
  • From Jennyt82 on June 30, 2009
    Loved the TWO chapters!!!!!!!! Keep up the fabulous work =) Update soon.
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  • From ANON - capt_davy_jones_gal on June 28, 2009
    OMG UR ALIVE!!!!....lol just read the latest chapters..keep it up...i check everyday or everyother day to see if there have been updates on my favs..
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  • From ANON - Erica on May 13, 2009
    I don't care what anyone says you have a Great writing skill keep up the GREAT WORK. I look forward to reading more of your stuff. I really enjoyed the underwear bit with Logon. I was laughing so hard I almost sprayed my computer with the soda pop I was drinking. Are you going to continue more of this story or do a new one if you do a new one I vote you write on Logon and give him a mate.
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  • From ANON - Gigi Allin on April 27, 2009
    I just wanted to say, I love this story! I am a very big fan of Beast. The man really doesn't get enough luvin'. Thank you so much for writing this> I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - tristanshawk on April 12, 2009
    More more more more! this is a truly enchanting piece. your characterisation is brilliant and your flow amazing. the only remotely constructive crit i can offer is to watch your tenses, you switch between past and present tensing which is easy to fix if you read it out loud to yourself. you'll see what i mean then. But otherwise, is there an alert list i can add myself to? i adore how real this is.
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  • From BloodBird on March 22, 2009
    This story is absolutely wonderful!
    I started reading this two weekends ago. I couldn't stop reading! I've been coming back to it whenever I had a spare moment and I just now caught up with it! You have a real talent for writing!
    I truly adore the way you have Beast as a sort of little alter ego that tries to take control at every turn. And the little moods he gets into! I nearly fell out of my chair when Hank started using mental images of Logan in a tennis skirt to keep the poor thing at bay! Ingenious!
    And the plot twists and all of the suspense! This is better than a soap opera! And I should know, I am in love with 'One Life to Live' and 'General Hospital.'
    I cannot wait for the next chapter! I am most anxious to see whatever it was the 'precious bundle' in Hank's coat pocket is.
    On that note I must end this review, please update soon.
    Ever your avid reader
    Wren
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  • From Jennyt82 on March 17, 2009
    Yay!!!!! You came back! I had thought that you were going to just leave us in the lurch like that for some time now. I was constantly checking for updates, so much so that it became part of my daily routine and yet nothing :( It was excruciatingly disheartening. But all that is in the past now, you're back just as amazing as you ever were and that's all that matters. So thanks for the brilliant update and i hope you update again so. Don't leave us so long without a chappie again. It would make me sad. ;)
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  • From bluelioness on March 14, 2009
    Ah, brava dear girl, brava. Talk about good fortune that the first time I bother checking this site in over a month and here is your satisfingly serendipitous update. Much thanks for props and it certainly did satisfy. Hee, aw man that was a great 'holy shit' moment when he actually breaks the sink! Niiiiiice. *would exclaim 'encore' but I know the plot needs to keep moving... poo* ;D
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  • From ANON - Squeegepooge on February 24, 2009
    I just wanted to let you know I GASPED in delight when I realized there were more than twenty chapters up! This story is fantastic, and in my opinion, the characters are very well captured.

    I have been reading this since I got off work, over FOUR hours ago! This is the longest time I haven't Myspaced when I'm home in a LONG time.

    You're great, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 15, 2008
    Can't wait for the rest of the story check every week in hopes to see more, it is well written and just because it doesn't work for one doesn't mean it isn't working for others that truly enjoy the story don't let the negativity of one turn you from what you obviously love, which is writing. As for the story line works for me for have had dealings of my own family being disfunctional (even before the term was created)as well as friends to who would concur about the way certain siblings get special treatment, Keep the good praise and look at the criticism with a grain of salt especially if they can't write any better themselves.
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  • From Historica on November 05, 2008
    As always, brilliantly fun chapter. Can't wait for the next!
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  • From ANON - Marie on September 28, 2008
    The story in itself is well-written but Amanda and her family just don't work for me. It's too much "poor mistreaded Amanda, evil sister & silly family" and creates repetitive themes: mostly Amanda whining/bitching about her family and the "my parents are so old-fashioned but I'm a modern self-reliant woman" bit (which is a staple in fanfiction for OFC characterisation). Amanda's short "I'm more than just beautiful" tirade from the chapter "Apologies" (or one before) was similar: it just felt a bit too pasted on for me; like she was quoting out of a wikipedia article on feminism or something like that.

    So, I really like the Hank/OFC relationship here, but the parts centering on Amanda's oh-so-evil family don't work for me.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 18, 2008
    It's hard to believe its coming down to the end of the story already. It's been a wonderful read and has never failed to make my day when i log on to see a new chapter waiting to make me smile (or frustrated when you're evil and leave cliff hangers of doom.) As always I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From KrypticZodiac on September 17, 2008
    Amazing as always!! Keep up the fantastic work!!!
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  • From bluelioness on September 14, 2008
    *whew* took me awhile to get to this one - sorry. Omg 'stronger and faster than your average semen' may be the best naughty superhero line EVER. Fantastic love scene, as always - the writing was especially good at conveying the rushed rain-soaked intensity, lol - certainly looking forward to Hank making good on his promise in the next chapter ;).
    I'm sad this is almost over (but I guiltily admit I look forward to more Hellboy chapters), but I have a feeling that your muse won't let Hank and Amanda sit on the backburner for long; god knows everytime I tell myself I'm done writing fan fiction for Hank *rolls eyes*. Hopefully I'll update soon, life's just really full right now :P sorry for the tangent - awesome chapter as always!!! And yay - she legally kicked James' ass!!!
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