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Reviews for A Heated Moment

By : band20
  • From ANON - slickboy444 on February 03, 2006
    Well, you've reviewed my fics, the least I can do is return the favor my friend! This was a great little scene. Very passionate and very heartfelt. I really enjoyed reading it. Kind of reminded me of a classic noble warrior making love to his princess...Very cool! All the marine training in the world couldn't hold a guy back from a moment like that and I think you did it all very well! It had just the right amount of description and emotion and I applaud you for that. Keep up the excellent work my friend! I think you should definitely write more for adultfanfiction.net! Keep up the excellent work my friend! And thanks again for all your support! Slickboy out.
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on February 02, 2006
    Well that was nice and worth the wait. I really liked that bit with her burning the holes in the bed although they're lucky that for some reason the rest of it didn't catch on fire. Plus her skin heating up was a nice touch, guess she'll have to learn to control that part of her from now on unless she wants to give him 3rd degree burns lol. But I bet it would be worth it, I could have a whole lot of 'hot' puns here but I think I'll skip on it. Although I didn't get why he was crying at the start maybe it was in the new chapter you put out.
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