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  • From ANON - LaShea on July 03, 2014
    OH...MY...GOD! This was too much for me.
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  • From ANON - historiennedulys on June 02, 2010
    Hey there! I have just found our fic and I'm in love with it! It's such a great read! Please keep going!


    Do you know the RoLo Realm? It's an archive of Logan and Ororo fics! I haven't seem you around there so I thought I should give the fans here a heads up! :)

    http://thehookupzone.net/RoLoRealm/index.php
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  • From ANON - Pari on July 17, 2008
    Sorry but so far I'm not liking this. You've made Ro quite the slut :(
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  • From ANON - v-love on December 09, 2006
    ...part 2 maybe
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  • From ANON - Chanel on November 16, 2006
    I felt somewhat disappointed by the ending to the story. Granted the story was a tragedy from the start, the ending left more to be desired. At the very least I wonder how the students will react with the deathes; even more so with the Jean's one bargining chip over the girls (logan) now gone. Would they tell the professor? Would Jean somehow dispose of them too? Will Scott ever remember? A lot of loose ends left unresolved to a story that I really enjoyed reading. All in All I have the liked the chapters up until #22 but wished there was a little more closture with the characters.
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  • From ANON - Steel Butterfly430 on October 26, 2006
    Okay, I'll try to keep this ConCrit as much as possible. I've never flamed, so hopefully it won't be seen as such.

    Alright, this chapter was way outta left field. You had me reeled in until the last chapter. If you know someone is being drugged, you don't tell people to make sure they aren't being hurt? Okay, so Jean threatened to make Logan look worse than it was. Um, (1) the Professor is telepathic also and would be able to read Jean's head and tell if she's lying or if what she's saying really happened (2) Being as Rogue would be the one to tell him since she got it outta Jean, he could ask her details about it that only Jean would know being a doctor and being the one to drug him and whatnot (3) The Prof has already had to stop Jean from power-abusing Scott once before so it wouldn't be that hard for him to believe that she's going overboard.

    Storm and Logan die? In that manner? I know not all stories are happy endings (those get boring sometimes), but this was so-I can't even think of a word for it. Unless I read wrong, Angel was there and brought someone back to the ship. Did they not see Storm struggling, or even after Logan got involved? And if Logan saw that Jean was the one manipulating whatever to try to kill Storm, why didn't he let the others know so more than he could help her back aboard?

    Overall, it was mostly a nice story, held my interest, nice humor where applied, but I think we'll just leave out the last chapter.

    SB
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2006
    This is a very good story. I would have to say the title is a misnomer, though. Shouldn't it be "Queen of Pain"? Jean was out of character from the book but the way you have her in the story fit and you kept your view of the characters very 'in-character'. Overall, like I said, a very good story.
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  • From Malestorm on October 25, 2006
    I know you will bring the pain in the Sequel. I know you better. So is Logan going to save her and they fall in love. HUH? Wouldn't that be some stuff, Jean has to pay regardless. Loved the story bring the pain!
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  • From ANON - INC on October 24, 2006
    Not only does Jean mess with Scott's mind she tries to kill Ororo. Logan should have broken her skull. You have to make a sequel I Enjoyed this too much to let it go .
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  • From ANON - lil'bit on October 24, 2006
    She must experience pain in the sequel because she can not win. Are Logan and Ororo coming back to bring it? Love it now get to writing
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  • From karmaxp on October 23, 2006
    You can't be serious!!! FIN! You leave Jean alive. Dude Rhayn SEQUEL! You know I love this
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  • From ANON - SyJen on October 22, 2006
    I am shocked that you would allow such a thing to happen and then to end it with that that that THING smiling. Is Gambit going to make her life hell before he kills her. SEQUEL you mean thing . I LOVE IT!
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  • From Amari on October 22, 2006
    You are killing me! She must pay. I do not care how you do it just do it in hte next story! I want blood and tears. Okay. By the way. Marvelous story!
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  • From Softly on October 22, 2006
    Okay after I was sick I could finally write that I hate Jean. I mean she wants Scott so bad she would kill for him. Man!!!!. I know Gambit will make her pay with her life. There has got to be a sequel. What will jubes and the girls? They will know that Jean had something to do with it. I need the next story! Loved it!
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  • From Allure on October 22, 2006
    WHAT! I know Gambit is going to make her pay or something close to it. That cannot be it. Are you hiding a sequel? What was she thinking trying to kill Ororo. Logan should have killed her but he had to save Ororo. Did he save her? Dude Rhayn come on! LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
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