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  • From ANON - Spider on December 23, 2005
    I demand you write more. I love your Scott i think heis so sexy. Logan is restraining himself more of the mind games type stuff. Jean is a bitch i hate her. I can't wait for the crap to fly and the plotting to begin. Great writing i await more
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  • From ANON - Lorna on December 23, 2005
    I want more!!!!!! I love this story Rhayn the concept is beautiful and the question what one man will do to have the woman he wants is about to be answered I am assuming Logan is the man but sometimes it seems its Scott. I can't wait for the scheming to begin. Bring on the next chapter HURRY!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Bluflame on December 23, 2005
    I love this. I know Logan's gonna do something i can just tell it he was irrate. I love Scott well YOUR Scott and Ororo he's strong and not an asshole. JEan will start her crap and Ororo and Scott will be caught between them how will they escape Jean and Logan. I must know great sexy chapter "Can I get out of Ororo and talk to you " Great line!!!!!!! Continue
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  • From ANON - SafeHaven on December 23, 2005
    I love your Scott. Hmm sex. Ororo is so lucky. I know Logan is going to do something he can't let Scott win. And Jean is a bitch She will be causing crap i know it I am hooked please keep going i love this story its got bite.
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  • From ANON - Hornet on December 22, 2005
    Okay Jean is officially a bitch and liar. Logan is kind of crazy. I want to be Ororo hMMMM SCott. I cracked up when scott said "Can i get out of Ororo and talk to you." LOL and kind of ohhhh. Your Scott is sexy and can i be Ororo. great update keep going.
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  • From Malestorm on December 22, 2005
    emmmmh Jean is not the kind of friend i want. I Love your Scott he's SEssy. I am loving the choas to come when Gambit and Logan return home to find out about Scott and Ororo. Who is going to tell Logan for some reason i can't see Jubilee doing it beacuse I think she likes them together. I sure do. MORE SEX FOR THEM :)
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  • From ANON - Kraven on December 20, 2005
    I love this . I really love your Scott he's kind fo sexy with the hair and the nice muscles and the sex DO IT AGAIN. I 'm going to love the choas coming excellent chapter keep going
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  • From karmaxp on December 20, 2005
    Ohhhh I love this as always I feel like GAmbit is starting not to trust that Logan wont try to use Ororo. I love your Scott. I think he is Yummy and he and Ororo should do it again. Jean is becoming a bitach and quickly with a little thing called jealousy. keep updating great chappie.
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  • From ANON - Teran on December 19, 2005
    Jean is acting like a royal bitch and Logan really might tear Scott a new one when he finds out. I do like Scott a lot in this chapter.
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  • From ANON - SafeHaven on December 19, 2005
    BEen wiating for you to update for a while now. LET THE GAMES BEGIN. Jean plotting, Gambit rethinking his place inOroro's life brother or lover, Logan just being Logan Xavier holding it all together. I'm hooked Fabulous work keep going
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  • From ANON - rololover1 on December 19, 2005
    I smell a scheme...
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  • From ANON - Spider on December 19, 2005
    Awww that was so CUTE between Scott and Ororo. Okay usually I like Jean but I don't like her in this one she has that I can get him anytime I want attitude after she has lost him. YEAH Gambit is coming around and seeing Logan as he is. I have a question The king of Pain is it Scott or Logan. what one man will do to have the woman he wants HMMMM I wonder Beautiful chapter continue with more
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  • From ANON - Hornet on December 19, 2005
    Ohhhhh I love this choas that's on the way back home I abslotuely love the talk Scott and Ororo had it was so CUTE. Gambit is turning and Scott is going to need all the allies he can get with Logan and Jean planning evil OMG I am biting my nails waiting for the next chapter with this bomb about to explode THIS IS EXCELLENT
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  • From karmaxp on December 18, 2005
    It's been almost a week will you update please
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  • From Malestorm on December 17, 2005
    Please update I am asking you with my mind
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