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Reviews for Unchained Instinct ( Complete)

By : Julia
  • From ANON - Jaden on October 24, 2006
    Wow, excellent update. I'm really glad that the story isn't over yet. Good work with the Rogue and Gambit parts. I like that the whole story isn't just revolving around two characters and a villain or two. It gives the story more depth.
    Keep up the good work.

    J_
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  • From ANON - BIGHUGEFANOFYOSTORIES! <3 on October 12, 2006
    YAY YOU'RE ALIVE! >=D I thought you like... quit the story ._. SO GLAD YOU'RE BACK! ^.^
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  • From ANON - Jaden on October 10, 2006
    Yes! I was hoping that this story would be updated again. I'm going to go read and review later.

    J_
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  • From Dendey on October 08, 2006
    Awww! This Chapter was sooo sweet again! Just like the one before! I really liked the moments in which Logan could find some solace in the mountains to ease his pained soul. The little waterfall sounded like it was pulled out of a dream, it seemed so tranquil.
    Great work! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 07, 2006
    Yay, update! Dankeschoen!
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  • From ANON - Dendey on August 31, 2006
    AWWWW!!! How cute!
    I still can't believe it! You make Logan act vicious and cruel and a few lines later, in which you let Kurt use just the right words, you make Logan unwind from his inner turmoil and crave affection like a puppy...it's so damn cute to imagine Kurt holding and protecting Logan for a while...
    Your a wonderful author and believe me! I've read a lot of stories, seen a lot of crap, enjoyed the stories of a lot of talented authors and craved some very good fictions from artists! Believe me when I say this: You are one of the few artists I've encountered so far and don't you ever dare let anyone tell you any different!
    It's simply fabulous how you change perspectives so easily, you never make the readers loose the red string, it's always at the ready, waiting to be taken up. The way you discribe the characters thoughts, all of them, are so logic and easy to follow that it's enlightening to read them, because you put so much of their persona into them. You really know how to use just the right words and that is a gift you should cherish.
    I'm hoping to read more stories from you soon, very soon indeed! For I've never felt as much emotion and especially inner struggle and general turmoil of the characters as I did while reading your story!
    You're not only keeping the characters in line, without needing to twist them into ooc-ness, but with just dishing out and letting them handle what they've got on their plate. That's admirable and I've never seen a story in which the characters are so...deep. Thank you for this wonderful story and the simple fact that it is yet to be finished.
    Ciao
    Dendey

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 20, 2006
    I really hope you haven't abandoned this fic, you seem to have put so much thought and effort into it it would be a shame if it remained unfinished.
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  • From ANON - Ninah on August 02, 2006
    I love your stories
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  • From ANON - Ranme on June 22, 2006
    Umm...is this one finished? I started reading it, havent stopped to sleep. So I am probably a bit incoherent right now. I love it!
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  • From ANON - Paul on June 21, 2006
    i read your story's in two days let me tell you... you are a God you hear me i hope you will fines this story soon but knot to soon this has to be the beast x-men story i've read in a long time, you are one of the best wrighters that i have ever seen, my god you sex seans thay... oh,my ummm lets just say that the room is a lot hotter then i remamber hehe... i cant help but kurt and loghan now belong to eachother so on that end i can no longer see them whit any one eles thainks a lot o_0 well keep up the good work you are the best e-mail me some time mabey i can help whit the story some how only love to help this master pice of your man you should take over marvel and make this happen MWHAHAHAHAHA i could help lol... welll get back to writing soon for your bigest littil fan Pau plezz ok have a good life... :)
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  • From ANON - chibi-monkey on June 18, 2006
    YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED IN FOREVER!!!! You better update now or I'll come over to your house and cut you! Logan and Kurt have through so much already....
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  • From ANON - Illianari on February 10, 2006
    I really enjoy your fics, they are well written, cohesive, and possibly most important, believable. I like that you take the time to develop a relationship between Logan and Kurt, instead of the traditional fan-fic standby of "My fic, who cares if it's in character or not. Now GET BUSY!!!" :) I also like that you take the time to address Kurt's recovery from his rape - far too many fics do the damage and then fade to black, which makes it seem like rape is the end, rather than the beginning of becoming a stronger person. Thank you for not being afraid to let Kurt heal, even if it was hard for him.

    I noticed it's been a while since you've updated Unchained Instinct, I hope you are planning to continue this fic. I also hope you don't think that your writing isn't being anticipated and enjoyed.

    Now, have a cookie, and keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Jaden on February 07, 2006
    I hope you update soon! I really like this story and I can't wait to see what else you come up with.
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  • From ANON - fuzzy on February 06, 2006
    *sigh* Forgot to mention that it is wonderful reading an 'adult' story by someone who actually is literate, articulate and has an actual plot that can be followed. Even some of the longer, supposedly plotty fics in this section are little more than disjointed strings of semi-related scenes liberally laced with (or totally drowned in) smut. Nice to see a real story.
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  • From ANON - fuzzy on February 06, 2006
    Hey there! Hadn't been keeping up with reading stuff on-line for quite a few months and had totally forgotten this, and then I popped on over here out of curiosity yesterday and went poking through the 'old' stuff. Quite an entertaining read overall and I do hope you're going to finish it. I have to admit that the characterization has been a bit hit and miss off and on, though that can be partially attributed to everything they've gone/are going through, I suppose. Kurt definitely seems more 'Kurt' to me in the bar chapter and the one after, though, and Logan's refusal to deal with things and running off seems quite IC to me as well. I'm with the reviewer who has problems with Logan calling Kurt 'sweetheart' but not so much with darling. For some reason sweetheart seems to feminize him too much for my taste, and while I love slash and adore this pairing I can't stand it when slash is basically just women with dangly bits. You certainly haven't gone there, but I suppose sweetheart is one of those terms that I really associate with that type of writing so it sets my hackles up. In any case, critique aside I really am looking forward to seeing how this ends and hope you're still planning on finishing it.
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