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Reviews for Fender Benders And Consequences

By : Karen
  • From ANON - ann on November 15, 2013
    Never rated any of the stories, but I HAD to tell you that this was an OUTSTANDING job. Loved the ending and how Marie didn't let Laurie's insane play doubt her man. Nice.
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  • From ANON - Me on September 07, 2010
    Over all I enjoyed it. Not many people AU M/L stories. When I review I try and be constuctive so here it goes. First of all the erotic sceence where veri enjoyable also although I usualy think of Logan as more guarded in his emotions and less open you tweeked him to fit his position yet not seem totaly outof character so good job there. I did feel the story was a bit rushed and compact but I believ you said this was your first so good starting point. Also you lacked any realy conflict. Marie walking in on Laurie and Logan would have been the perfect place to create the miss understanding between them for a chapter or so. This is what makes readers hang on to the edge of there seats. I know it's not enjoyable to make your characters suffer but it realy makes the happy ending all the happier. Overall great job you had me drooling. I want to reiterate this is not a flame just constructive critisism. And I apologise for my bad spelling and grammer I'm on my iPod.
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  • From Kirathekiller on May 24, 2008
    I've only read half the first chapter and love it already.
    I just wanted to pause mid-way to tell you that the fact you have given Marie a Kitten called "Rogue" in the story is really cute, cos as I'm reading this I'm sitting with my kitten "Logan" asleep in my lap XD
    Just thought I'd tell ya =D

    *And back to the fic Lol*
    =3
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  • From ANON - shadowlady on October 24, 2006
    I loved it. So touching, heartwrenching and emotional but it was great! I'm definitely going to be reading it again!
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on October 21, 2005
    Thank you for the lovely story.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on October 09, 2005
    Lovely, dreamy wedding.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on October 01, 2005
    Nice baby WAFF with a touch of nice smut. More please.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on September 23, 2005
    LMAO! Mr. Wing Wang? This is definitely AU. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - Kaesi on September 20, 2005
    Oopsies, Logan is gonna be in big trouble. Please make it so Marie gets the full story and doesn't blow off and break of the engagement, I mean come on even Marie couldn't be that retarted to be engaged to a guy and then not trust him. Anyway, update soon, and maybe make the chapters longer.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on September 09, 2005
    ACK!! Evil cliffie! Which one of them will Marie clobber? More soon please.
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  • From ANON - megan on September 09, 2005
    oh shame on u for leaving a cliffhanger like that! now thats just evil
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  • From ANON - 2sistersLOgan on September 08, 2005
    OH man you must UPDATE PLEASE Poor Logan and Poor Marie
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  • From ANON - Karen on August 18, 2005
    What does WAFF mean?
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on August 18, 2005
    Nice WAFF and smut in this chapter. Now Ororo and anybody else interested in Logan and Marie's personal lives can bugger off. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on August 06, 2005
    Thank you for the latest in this story. Gotta love Agnes! More please.
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