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By : sumthinelse
  • From MissyMisfortune on April 02, 2011
    Oh gosh! Sooo good. I have tears in my eyes. That is no easy thing to achieve. The only bad critique I have for you is spelling - go proofread your story and fix all the little spelling errors and this story will be nothing short of perfect. It was a bit out of character for them both but the way you cacooned the events of the story make it work wonderfully. Well done ^.^
    ~Missy Misfortune
    "Going with the flow isn't so foolish, as long as it takes your forward.".¸¸·´¯`·.¸¸.ஐ
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  • From ANON - Breanna on January 20, 2005
    My God... you have absolutely no right to be writing fanfiction. I've read four of your stories, and all four of them have smart plots, sexy as hell, are cleverly written, and have wonderful characterizations. To me they look flawless. If you do not write professionally, you missed your calling. What I think I like the most about you (Next to your grasp of the characters) is the fact that you aren't afraid of sex. You describe these sex scenes as incredibly steamy, but I can also see real people engaging in these scenes. It seems like a lot of writers on this site tend to make the scenes unrealistic and too romance novel, but you don't have that problem. You have no right to be writing fanfiction... but thank God that you do.
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  • From ANON - fuzzybluelogic on October 20, 2004
    Great Googaly Moogaly! The grooviness of you!
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  • From ANON - TKD on May 01, 2004
    Damn! Whether or not there's any more to this, that was beautiful. I actually was a bit teary at their parting. Nice, nice work.
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  • From ANON - Rogue3011 on April 30, 2004

    Hey

    This fic is good...one of the few x-men ones i like. It is written well and your characterization is lovely. I also love the sexy Kurt. You describe him in a different light that appeals to me.
    Update soon!!!

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  • From ANON - rubberduck on April 27, 2004
    yay, the story continues. um, i don't have anything else to comment on at this time. maybe next chapter. get it out soon.
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on April 26, 2004
    i'm not really a fan of rape fics, so it's a good thing i don't really consider this rape. it was a bit nonconcensual but i think kitty wanted it as much as kurt. i do like how kitty turned the roles around and did the same to kurt to prove a point. this was an excellent character study of how a couple wrong turns can lead to such extreme actions. i hope this isn't the end. i would like to see how they can (or can't) get together and mend their relationship again.
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  • From ANON - A.J. on April 23, 2004
    God damn!! Cha 3 w 3 was great!! Talk about lemony fireworks for the mutant couple. I wasn't expecting that to happen so soon but I'm glad it did. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - TKD on April 23, 2004
    Nice. Is this the ending, or do you have more in store for this? Either way, it's good.
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  • From ANON - A.J. on April 22, 2004
    This fanfic is great!! I started reading it yesterday and was instantly pulled in by it's realness and depth of character development. Please update soon so we can see if Kitty and Kurt will finally make up or if their friendship is gone for good!
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  • From ANON - fignuts on April 21, 2004
    Very good, I love rape fics, and very well written too, I hope Kurt and Kitty can eventually make up or at least be friendlier, but if not thats cool too :0)
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  • From Spook on April 21, 2004
    wow.
    this was really, really good
    i liked it a lot
    will there be more? it's excellent, even as a one-shot.
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  • From ANON - bluefooted on April 20, 2004
    "O frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!" Isn't that how it goes? Eh, I'm getting a bit rusty. Anyway, really really nice - I like how you add just enough darkness to the characters to make us squirm, but not too much to make us hate them. Who knew Xavier's was such a den of moral turpitude? Makes sense, though. Weren't we all brimming with moral turpitude as teens? I think the little intro bit about 'moments' also adds quit a lot of nice thought to the story. Since you haven't mentioned (at least I don't think you did) whether this goes on or not, I'll just speculate for a moment. While I always wish the stories that I like would go on forever, I think this one could stand very well just where it is. That's not to say I wouldn't be thrilled if it continued, but it does have a lot of emotional impact as a short story.
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