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Reviews for Hiding

By : SadieHyde
  • From ANON - TKD on March 01, 2004
    Well damn. You made me a happy bunny with all those chapters. It's still a good read and I can't wait to see what happens...I have a feeling the whole Logan/Roisin and Kurt/Roisin thing could get interesting, to go along with the already interesting COH thing. Btw, didn't realize you were setting this post-Draco arc. I'd assumed it was set pretty close after the whole Holy War fiasco. Anyway, I hope you have more coming soon, *really* want to see what's coming next.
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  • From ANON - Chiyome on March 01, 2004
    Never really thought about Kurt in this way before. Now, all I'm thinking is that a guy who's been training to be a priest would have a lot of built up tension. Love the new chapters...keep it coming.
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  • From ANON - Magnus on February 27, 2004
    Spot on! *Smiles*
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2004
    So far so good. I really enjoy the latest tension created by Logan bursting in on your twntrantrals... you keep delaying and inconveniencing the final realization of their attraction which I find engaging... it keeps me reading... give up the goods too soon and I would lose interest as a reader, as I imagine you might as a writer... The more human aspects of your OC are quite entertaining and well wrought... the clumsiness, the drinking, the freaking out, the sexual playfulness, but the mutant aspects of her character are much less defined and rationalized. I still don't quite understand how she makes clothes or how that ability is realized, it all seems more magical than mutant, which can be fine too... its just off a bit to me... Also the irony of her mutant appearance (cat-like) and her clumsiness feels a bit heavy handed. However, the most important thing I can say is keep writing! Add more when you can. You've got a greaginnginning that I am thoroughly enjoying, and I'm ready for a great continuation!
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  • From ANON - TKD on February 15, 2004
    ACK! All I can say is that I hope you write *really* fast. What a place to leave it. Those damn psychos! Like Kurt needed any more guilt on his poor fuzzy head - and where did they find a little blue fuzzy to crucify...? *sigh* I hope the elf gets to kick some very serious hiney before this is over - wouldn't mind if Logan did a bit of disemboweling either, now that I think of it. You've done a good job of building tension and setting the scene, that's for sure...
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  • From ANON - Numbers on February 13, 2004
    This story is awesome, I loved the Church of Humanity storyline in the books... I hope there's more to this some time, it's really great. And I usually have problems with original characters, but I like Roisin. :D :D
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  • From ANON - TKD on February 11, 2004
    Ack! You are cruel and evil - how could you leave it there? I *really* hope you're able to update soon. Poor Fuzzy. He doesn't need any more shit in his screwed up little life. Good flow, good development of your character. I *really* like Roisin's personality and the image of her shop as a 'mom and pop' - how she interacts with her customers and how she cares for Kurt. Btw, I think I forgot to mention last chapter that the image of Roisin doing Logan with the strap is just....OMG! Had me laughing - but it's also the kind of thing I can see him doing, see him needing. Anything to prove to himself that he can feel.
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  • From ANON - TKD on February 09, 2004
    Just thought I'd be a dreadful nag - anymore of this coming any time soon? It's quite well done and I'd love to see poor Kurt get some kind of resolution after that whole Holy War fiasco, even if it is of the BDSM variety. Who knows, it could be *just* what he needs. *G*
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 06, 2004
    Wow, this is really good. You've done a good job of giving your OC a past and a personality and I can't wait to see just how she's going to go about 'hel;ing' the elf. Hope you update REAL soon.
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  • From ANON - Magnus on February 05, 2004
    More fanfiction goodness. Come on people, put up some reviews, you know she deserves them.
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  • From ANON - TKD on January 31, 2004
    Oooh, more soon I hope. This is looking so very interesting at this point. Domination as therapy...might do the elf a world of good. *G*
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2004
    Um, was there anything new here? I got my hopes up when it was bumped up to the top of the list again, but I've already read the last chapter.... *sigh* Hope there's new stuff soon.
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  • From ANON - Magnus on January 25, 2004
    Keep those chapters coming. You are doing great. And than you for your vote of confidence. *bows*
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2004
    Poor Kurt, at least *someone's* addressing the emotional hell he must have gone through after that whole Church of Humanity fiasco - Austen sure didn't bother with it. Making him a priest in the first place was a *stupid* idea of CC's, but Austen pathetic contrivance for getting him out of it was a farce and an insult to the poor guy. Like how you're doing this though - and your OC is interesting. THough her talents and physical mutations are an odd and unrelated mish-mash, she doeve qve quite the interesting past and personality. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 18, 2004
    Very good so far - nice introduction of your OC and some good character development. It's nice to see an 'adult' story that doesn't just jump straight into the explicit stuff. This doesn't feel like it's just an excuse to write smut, it's an actualy story with some plot and interesting character points. Hope to see more soon - also hope to eventually see the remaining COH guys dealt with appropriately.
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