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Reviews for Frail

By : sumthinelse
  • From Poisongirl on January 05, 2009
    Fucking lovely. Well written, good ending, just an all around great story...
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 01, 2006
    loved the story . including the ending.awesome
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  • From ANON - calicat on February 21, 2004
    God, what a good story. Very well written, and I couldn't help but laugh when she said she was gay. That was priceless. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Hisakini on February 16, 2004
    Ouch!! Go Jenny!! Hehehe, I didn't even see that coming. But very good so far.
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  • From SadieHyde on February 15, 2004
    Wonderful. I can't really think of anything to add- really a great short story. You should be proud. :)
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  • From ANON - LaviniaSavant on February 14, 2004
    wow.

    not something i'd read again, but something i'm glad i did. well done.
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  • From ANON - TKD on February 14, 2004
    Well, I've got to say it, that *kicked ass*. Great ending. It's been so long since I read the beginning that I don't remember if there was anything to indicate she was gay earlier. What a way to totally kick the pathetic loser in the balls. Should I be worried that you have such a great handle on Creed? The characterization for everyone was just spot-on for the whole thing. Great work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 14, 2004
    Great story...I have never che at at the end of a fic before now. It was wonderful.
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  • From ANON - TKD on February 04, 2004
    Wow. Very powerful and very...creepy isn't the right word, but it's the only one coming to me at the moment. Despite how profoundly disturbing this is, I'm glad you haven't forgotten it. You've got me on tenterhooks here, wondering what the deal *is* with Creed and this poor kid. I'll be watching for the next chapter. (On this and your other 2 fics - how the *heck* do you manage that? ^_~)
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  • From sarafimm on February 02, 2004
    This is good. The alluded detail on the rape is enough to give it seriousness without detracting from the story. Interesting plot. Would prefer future chapters don't focus on all the other characters and their views/opinions, but stay with the central figure. Would like some more background on the "Frail" of the story--why no relatives have showed up. The fact that she has to face reality and resume life ... deal with her personal belongings, who's paying rent, etc. To the author: Please continue.
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  • From ANON - TKD on February 02, 2004
    And here I thought you'd forgotten this one. I'm impressed - I won't even *try* to have more than one fic going at a time. Knowing me I'd lose track of which I was working on or lose interest in one if it got hard or something and I'd never finish one or both. ^_~

    Short, but telling bit there. Nice look into Jean and leaves me *really* wondering what Creed's deal is.

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  • From ANON - Q-kaidao on October 18, 2003
    Finally someone writes a story that's more in line with the Sabertooth of old. I've got nothinginstinst the bad boy or reformed Creed stories,but just like the good old fashion good verus evil stories once in a while.
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