Reviews for Captain Marvel and Ms. Marvel: Writing Checks...

BY : TiffyB


  • From TiffyB on April 24, 2020

    I would actually agree with you, SailorNemesis!

    The outline I was given for chapter 2 was a bit more brutal than I'm usually comfortable writing (and what was actually written was very toned down)...

    I'm still fairly new as far as writing fanfic goes, so maybe I need to learn to push back or take better ownership in crafting the outlines into something uniquely my own.

    But, thank you for your feedback. I'm always happy to hear it. ^^



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  • From SailorNemesis on April 23, 2020

    Good to see chap2, though I did not like as much as the first.  I preferred the semi-con in chap 1 and creative use of Ms. Marvel's powers to actually take that enormous member.  Chap 2's rape and Carol being more sadistic rather then domming and manipulative was less enthralling.  

    Hoping for chap3, preferrably with preggo sex, or at least Kamala getting knocked up for now.



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  • From justheretoread on April 21, 2020

    Also Captain Marvel had a protege in Aranna/Spider-Girl for a little bit, if you are looking for other ones to mention. 



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  • From justheretoread on April 21, 2020

    Also Captain Marvel had a protege in Aranna/Spider-Girl for a little bit, if you are looking for other ones to mention. 



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  • From justheretoread on April 21, 2020

    loving this story, hope you continue.  



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  • From SailorNemesis on January 19, 2020

    Hot stuff, want more.  Carol needs to make Kamala her full-time stress relief girl.  



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