Really good second chapter! 

The interaction between Mary Jane and Peter Parker was lovelly and really sexy.

Now I am interested to see what will the next chapter be about and if Mary Jane will either have sex with Emma or have an orgy with Emma! Hope to see Peter having more action with MJ and maybe other ladies along with MJ!

As always great chapter, so keep up the good work!

Interesting second chapter but i'm more curiouse what will happen in next chapter, will Mary Jane and Ema do each other or will they have something else like orgy and will Mary Jane cheat on Peter and if she does i hope Peter will be ok with it because i would like to see Mary Jane with other men and women in this story and still with Peter but either way i'm looking forward to the next chapter and hope for some hot sex scene.

Excited you're doing a sequel! Can't wait for more!

When's the nxt chap coming?also right tags

Include Red Head Red Hear Duo(Jean+Marrie Jane).....

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Wow!! Great Come back Mann, very excited for next parts, wonder if Shanobi Shaw will break the Prison and get his Revenge on the X-men, Whether Marrie Jane and White Queen will team up with the x-men and spiderman, and will there be an orgy between all of them!!! 

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This is going to be a very excellent, very riveting story, isn't it? The first half of this opening chapter was exciting enough, with Mary Jane basically being an even sexier and naughtier version of Oracle to Spider-Man's Black Canary. Definitely a very unique twist on their interaction. Then with Emma Frost herself showing up and offering Mary Jane the biggest opportunity of her life . . . holy shit, it got even better. Now I'm really looking forward to the next chapter(s) in this story from you, and in retrospect, if Mary Jane can have a regular nightclub in comics canon, why not managing the Hellfire Club in this excellent piece of work? I'm just curious now as to how she's gonna sell Peter on it.

GREAT!!!! Excellent descriptions and dialogues and great graphic detail's like Aways!!!

Hope the Xmen will be included in this as well.

Will be excited to see the New Red Queen giving her "Full Mary Jane Treatment" to Scott Summers and other Xmen, and some Spider Man and Jean Grey and Emma' Frost Pairings as well . and offcourse some Orgy/Gangbang as well!!! 

Hope this series is atleast 20 Parts long... 

Great work dude, Great fan of your Art!!!! 

This story is great. I've been a huge fan of your work for years; especially the prequel to this. To have this appear is just another way for me ot get another great Spider-Man story.

Have to say, after reading this, I can see Mary Jane take up the role as Red Queen. Her character has pretty much been written out of Spider-Man's life in the main comics, along with several others, but after reading this and the other story, I can actually see Mary Jane Watson be as such if Marvel was a little more honest with her character development when they gave her such a back story.  I am definitely curious to see how such a decision will affect both her and Spider-Man.

Also makes me wonder what you could have done with other women that have entered significantly into Spider-Man's life since you've done so much with this one.

A very interesting start for this sequel. Hope there is more MJ/Peter action in the future for this fic but also having Peter participating in some of MJ's activities. 

Well i hope that next chapter will have more sex stuff in it and to me second part was a little to long but i like Mary Jane so i will be reading more, i just hope second chapter will be hotter.

Pretty good start and a neat sequel. Even your writing has improved. Could there possibly be a Scott/Emma scene in the near future wink'wink. But not harm if there isn't.