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Reviews for Making Memories

By : miladygrimm
  • From ANON - Saljaer on April 20, 2015
    Jubilee and Mystique was a pleasant surprise, I've been intrigued with them as a couple ever since a fic I read years ago that I sadly cannot find.

    The dominant and the playful submissive looking to test her bounds was delicious, and you did their encounter amazingly. I especially liked the little details of just what Raven could bring to an encounter, and of the adornments of a collar and cuffs that Jubilee wore. It turned into something else at the end, as Jubilee begged for Raven to stay only for her to admit she couldn't for her convictions. It was sweet and sad, and I would simply adore to see more of them, both in the bedroom and perhaps off on a secretive date away from their peers.

    Thanks for writing this, I do hope to see more of this great fic!
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  • From ANON - Saljaer on April 20, 2015
    Now that was a fun reunion with the possibility of more.

    Olivia's power is an intriguing one that I'm sure might be fun later on. You do a wonderful job of portraying Hank, always one of my favourites. He's a man with his own awareness, and Olivia's bluntness was a treat. An invitation of breakfast leading towards a date? Now that is something to look forward to.
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  • From ANON - Saljaer on April 20, 2015
    The first chapter really helps to bring life to Olivia, there are all sorts of wonderful touches, from how nervous she is to be back as a teacher instead of a student, to the hints of her family. With Ororo as a roommate of sorts, even if they're just sharing a bathroom, it's a friendship waiting to happen. Perhaps more? I suppose the chapters ahead might tell me. Thanks for this!
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