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Reviews for March Madness

By : DrunkenScotsman
  • From ANON - Anon on April 18, 2015
    Slightly disapointed that things didn't shake out right for Bobby, but this lets the story go in a more in-depth direction. I approve.

    (note: I've been a Duke fan for 20 years, and were this situation to happen with me, I too would curse them unendingly.^_^)
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  • From Daye on April 17, 2015
    Read the full chapter 4. Some nice build up of the UST here. Interesting that now it seems to be Jubilee who wants it. It'd have to be with that bet result. I thought from the start that jubilee winning the last one would be the most interesting scenario.

    After all, the bet says he can't masturbate not that they can't continue fooling around...
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  • From marvelmaster616 on April 07, 2015
    Haven't forgotten about this story, my friend. As of today, the tournament is over. Duke has won. So I guess that means Jubilee has won the bet. Does that mean we'll get no sexy finale? I hope not. I'm confident you'll find a way to make a happy ending out of this, pun totally intended. lol
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  • From Daye on March 30, 2015
    Great chapter. I really like what you're doing with them, emotions wise. The uncertainty and hesitancy on both sides, is very interesting. I like that Kitty is giving Jubilee all the blowjob advice.I also like the side-pairing of Sam and Danielle.

    Silly Jubilee though! Should have taken the offer of giving each other head there...
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  • From Aysha on March 30, 2015
    This was a really great chapter the perfect mix of experienced and inexperienced, and truth be told what guy doesn't like a good facial. :D

    In the meantime how about a cliche chapter where they get trapped hiding somewhere and end up watching one of the other couples engaged in carnal activities. ;)
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  • From Aysha on March 29, 2015
    this chapter was good even though it was limited by the nature of their bet expecting to get hotter as the tournament continues.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 24, 2015
    Characterization: good. Smut content: good. Story: good.

    Among other things, I like the dynamic between Bobby and Jubes, and also that they each have some experience and aren't "total" virgins. The setup was an intriguing wrinkle too. Only thing I'll ask is that no matter who wins Week 2, have the description be a tad longer.
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  • From Daye on March 23, 2015
    Sports talk still means nothing to me. Lol. But I did enjoy the handjob scene there's a nice mix of fun, banter, with the implication of denied feelings.

    nice job.
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  • From Daye on March 17, 2015
    Ha! What a fun little idea for a fic. Though I know nothing of american sports. Will the winners of theses bets be determined by the winners in real life then?
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  • From marvelmaster616 on March 12, 2015
    Well this is a nice little treat with an interesting format. Not a lot of people do X-men Evolution stories anymore, but you still stand out, my friend. You still put an admirable level of quality into each story. For that, I thank you. But what makes this special is that it combines two of my favorite things: X-men and sports. I love it!

    I like how you set up the stakes here, having a specific reward for each level. The end part definitely raised the stakes a bit with Bobby challenging Jubilee to go full service, so to speak. lol It'll be interesting to see how this plays out. Any chance other characters will get involved? Or will it only involve Bobby and Jubilee? Either way, I look forward to seeing more. Keep up the awesome work, my friend! Take care.

    MarvelMaster616
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  • From Aysha on March 11, 2015
    so far I'm loving the story and its premise. even though I hate basketball in all its incarnations! I think the pairing of Bobby and Jubilee is a really good idea, so I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :D
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