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Reviews for March Madness

By : DrunkenScotsman
  • From HenshinDaisuke on June 09, 2015
    Loved this story, really would love to see more stories done as sequels following some of the other X-Men as well.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 02, 2015
    Huh! Not what I was expecting to finish up(was wanting a bit more smut), but it's nice to see a happy ending with no doom 'n gloom. "Jubilation Drake" has a ring to it. Well done sirrah!
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  • From marvelmaster616 on May 31, 2015
    Just finished reading the final chapter. Overall, a job well done! Once again, you've written an engaging, well-developed story. It hit on all the right emotional chords. It was funny, sweet, romantic, and sexy. It was basically the complete package. March Madness might be over now, but you found a way to make it even more enjoyable. I'm not a big Bobby/Jubilee fan, but you really made their relationship here feel fun and genuine. That's quite an accomplishment and for that, you should be proud. Again, great job. I really enjoyed this and I look forward to seeing more of your stories in the future. If ever you want to discuss ideas, feel free to contact me at any time. Until then, take care, my friend!

    MarvelMaster616
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  • From Aysha on May 30, 2015
    reviewing chapter 9. So all that flirting was Jubilee setting him up, very clever! Great chapter love the whole thing going to read chapter 10 now
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  • From Daye on May 24, 2015
    That as a very nice scene. Definitely felt real for their first time and the aftermath was intriguing. They're sort of together but still very unsure and shaky relationship wise which definitely makes sense. And wow? All virgins? Surprising and interesting there as well.

    Hope its going to work out for them.

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  • From ANON - Anon on May 24, 2015
    About time! The only(and I mean only) ding I'm going to give it is that after all this time, the sex scene was WAY too short. I was hoping for more of a 'Kitchen Sink' treatment(as in 'everything but the...') Still, very good. I like.
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  • From Daye on May 23, 2015
    Chapter 8 review. Sorry it took me so long to read and review. Anyway, That was fun. Jean had some nice banter in there. Though it does seem weird that she can and will literally stop Bobby from moving when he tries to jack off. Think a voice in a ear would make him jump/stop what he was doing. Always makes me wonder what the penalty would have been if he had welshed on the no-wanking deal.

    Still I do like Jean and her message of 'just make your mind up!' works for the story and as her delivering it considering that was pretty much how Evo depicted her relationshup with Scott.

    I was wondering whether we were going to get some action her. Especially when Jubilee got involved but the chapter didn't seem long enough. Cruel to cut it there but since i delayed so long Chapter 9 is up for me to read straight off. Hurray!
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  • From Aysha on May 20, 2015
    chapter 7 was incredibly good I never expected him to get flashed by both Tabby and Amara, but it looks like he's going to be teeth by just about every girl in the mansion. lol
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  • From marvelmaster616 on May 19, 2015
    Loved this latest chapter. Man, Jubilee was a real bitch, getting the other girls to tempt Bobby like that. But now she's finally making it up to him. Justice will hence be restored. lol Really enjoyed Jean Grey's little scene. I can totally see her doing the Jessica Rabbit bit. In fact, I can see Scott enjoying that even more than Bobby. lol Maybe in another fic. But I think Bobby has been tormented enough here. I'm glad he's finally getting a chance to hook up with Jubilee as he tried to do with the bracket. Looking forward to the finished product, my friend. Keep up the great work! Take care.

    MarvelMaster616
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  • From Daye on May 12, 2015
    ha ha! You're enjoying dragging all this UST out! It's getting a bit sillier and funner now, whereas you'd done more character work before. Still I enjoyed it. There's a nice sense of realism about your descriptions.

    Oh and clearly Jubes has told everyone about the bet right? That's why all the girls are showing off in his no-wank time.
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  • From Daye on April 27, 2015
    Lovely chapter! Especially Rogue's guest appearence and advice. It's like you know I like her or something :P

    Good charter stuff here. very interesting Bobby turning her down like that. Presumably he's just realised he doesn't just want to fool around with her. And suddenly doesn't want to. Cool stuff.
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  • From marvelmaster616 on April 27, 2015
    Poor Bobby. He's had a rough couple of weeks. lol And man Rogue, that was cruel. But I liked it. This chapter felt more like the Rogue I came to know and love from the 90s cartoon. Smart, sassy, sexy and an unapologetic tease. That's something X-men Evolution kind of forgot. In fact, every single medium of X-men appears to have forgotten that side of Rogue. It's sad really. But I digress. This was a good chapter and one that gave Rogue a chance to have fun. But at some point, I hope Jubilee stops tormenting Bobby. I think he's earned a little slack. Keep up the good work, my friend. Take care!

    MarvelMaster616
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  • From Aysha on April 27, 2015
    I'm really enjoying this, that bit with Rogue was downright evil, and awesome! :D
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  • From Aysha on April 19, 2015
    poor Bobby! sucks to be a loser in a bet like that. great chapter! keep up the good work but don't push yourself too hard and fall behind on your work. :)
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  • From Daye on April 19, 2015
    The story continues to entertain. I'm a little sad Bobby didn't get to see anything more than an upskirt :P But it helps build up his feelings of unease and frustration.

    I like the whole 'you mean you're not?' thing from Sam and Dani and the not-sexts were funny. Good job.
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