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Reviews for The Gwen Stacy Syndrome

By : Ksennin
  • From ANON - Terego on January 06, 2015
    We've come full circle! And now we're in for something awesome!
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  • From ANON - Serious Sam on December 30, 2014
    I really dig this. Definitely feeds the male ego, but I love the idea of Peter-MJ-Felicia in love together.
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  • From redsliver on November 20, 2014
    I am a huge fan of your writing. You're skillful and more careful than most fanfiction authors. The quality is superb. As a storyteller you're just as telented. You are very much a show and not tell kind of writer and that is the best attribute I can name. You have a clear and respect and affection for the worlds you work in.

    This is my favorite of your stories, because Spider-man is my favorite comic book hero. I've really enjoyed reading and will definitely look forward to your updates.
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  • From Daye on November 10, 2014
    Hmmm. Psychics mucking around with your brain now there's the basis of a healthy relationship.

    Psylocke is a good addition to the cast though.
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  • From MF22 on November 09, 2014
    Yes, she is indeed sexy, but it's not due to her heritage. That she's Asian (or rather, her host, whichever you prefer) is of no consequence; sexy is sexy. Although she does get bonus points for the accent. Irish, English, and Australian accents have always been a weakness of mine. That was one hell of a gift Felicia sent her, and I'd be fucking jealous, no lie.
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  • From Daye on October 23, 2014
    Second time, I've read one of your multipart stories, refreshed and immediately got a new chapter.

    This one is... more than a little silly. Sexy but very silly. The bitching about Carlie Cooper and Gwen seems a little too... on the nose to me. But I don't read modern spider-man comics so I don't have the same.. strength of feeling where that's concerned. And Darcy appearing seems a little random.

    But otherwise fun and sexy. And that's two mentions of pegging now! I hope you're going to follow through on that scene. It's presented as 'lol, Peter's in for a surprise' but I like it. For the last chapter, I really love the letter at the start and the scene with Cap and Tony. That was hilarious. I have no idea who the kraven chick is though.

    Well done and keep up the writing1
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  • From KaelHyun on September 29, 2014
    Part of me really hopes Darcy joins them in there relationship as she really would work well with them.
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  • From ANON - Plat on May 17, 2014
    So awesome. So, so awesome. This does not have nearly enough love in the review section. Good job and keep it up!
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  • From MF22 on May 06, 2014
    Yeah, that chapter pretty much confirmed it. There's no way this is your first steamy story. I mean, it's so graphic, yet still done in a tasteful manner. It's not mindless sex; there's actually feeling, emotion present. Peter is in character, but his hidden wild side is shown after Felicia shamelessly hits on him, and throws herself at him. I envy Peter for being in that situation. I don't know if I would've been able to be in a three-way relationship as Peter is, but the girls don't mind one bit, and demand they be a package deal. It's incredible, and the connection is real. It's not based on mere lust, but bonds of mutual trust, respect, and love. I never thought it possible to actually love more than one person at a time, but the fic makes me wonder. Great job.
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  • From MF22 on April 28, 2014
    OK, that was really hot! Peter's a lucky SOB, and he didn't even have to do or say anything; they made the move for him!
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  • From ANON - gig on April 28, 2014
    You are on fire! Whatever you're taking to churn out these awesome fics, keep it up.
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  • From redsliver on January 27, 2014
    I love Peter Parker's dated references. It doesnt seem right if he mentions a movie from this decade. Hot, over the top, comedic banter, everything great Spidey erotica needs. You are a very amusing pornographer. You make me nearly capable of sitting through Thor or Agent of S.H.I.E.L.D. just so I have the proper vantage point for your other fics.
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  • From marvelmaster616 on January 23, 2014
    Just read the first chapter and I enjoyed it. This was very well-written. It had great dialog and a good touch of humor. Mary Jane and Black Cat were a lot of fun. Mary Jane was a bit OOC, but it was still enjoyable. I wish there had been more details on her romp with Black Cat, but I think it set things up nicely. You also nicely captured the lingering tension between Peter and Mary Jane. It has been documented time and again, all the complications keeping them apart. It may be cliched, but you did a nice job of making it feel fresh. Keep up the good work. I encourage you to write more.

    MarvelMaster616
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  • From DSTorres on January 22, 2014
    Great beginning. Please update soon.
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  • From AnansiScribe on January 21, 2014
    Still funny as hell. Hell, I like the banter more than I like the sex, and the sex is pretty good. Poor Peter Parker, trapped between two luscious beauties who love messing with his heads. As for Peter jerking it to Emma Stone, nice nod to her playing Gwen Stacy in The Amazing Spider-Man film series, even if I still think she'd make a better Mary Jane.
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