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Reviews for X-men Supreme: Remy and Betsy in the Shower

By : marvelmaster616
  • From Daye on December 03, 2013
    Remy and Betsy that is a paring you don't see very often, so kudos for originality. And the shower setting is some thing I always like to see.

    Exploring Betsy's new bodies and the differences and the sexuality of it is also a nice theme. But I think it led to there being a bit too much set up into short a time. Betsy basically harassing Remy in the showers is a bit... well if the gender roles were reversed it would definitely not be seen as good thing. Word choice is something I'd like to high light as needing a bit of work. Words like 'vagina' and especially 'bowels' don't sound sexy and slithering penis is also an odd mental image.

    On the whole though this was a rather fun fic and its amazing how much eveyrone gets around in X-Men Supreme. ;)
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