Reviews for X-23 and Jubilee: A Night In Paris

BY : BlueInfernoX

  • From Speyeder on June 14, 2013

    Very nice. It is one I will hold on, very easy to read :)

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  • From AFFModerator on April 10, 2013

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  • From Aysha on April 08, 2013

    A truly excellent story. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for your contribution and hard work.


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  • From MarvelMaster616 on April 06, 2013

    Nice little one-shot here! I enjoyed it. Love the different points of view between Jubilee and X-23. I really enjoyed the chemistry they had in the X-23 series. It's too bad it wasn't explored in the comics. I think you explored it here very nicely and very thoroughly, so to speak. lol Between a vampire's bloodlust and X-23's instincts, I think they make for pretty compatible, albeit aggressive, lovers. Again, great job! I encourage you to do more.


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  • From Redsliver on April 06, 2013

    A fun little one shot. Kudos. My advice, remove the "FEMSLASH AHEAD WARNING!" and remove it quickly. Your story is clearly labelled as such, is clearly built up as such and anyone whose reading your story will hit that speed bump and it will take them out of the story. Seriously, get rid of that. Have some confidence and respect your readers. Otherwise, well done.

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