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Reviews for The Spider and the Goddess

By : AgentGv01
  • From ANON - Anon on April 02, 2013
    Love the premise
    Spidey deserves some good luck
    Also have so many requests for characters I'm just gonna list my top ten:
    MJ, Black Cat, Silver Sablinova, Kitty Pride, Rogue, Black Widow, She-Hulk, Miss Marvel, Jessica Drew, Julie Carpenter

    Hope to see more soon
    Swanboy
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  • From marvelmaster616 on April 01, 2013
    I've been looking forward to this story for a while now and it was definitely worth the wait. lol Peter may be lucky 99 percent of the time, but during that one percent when he does manage to scrap some luck from fate he makes it count. I like how Aphrodite sensed that Peter had already had his soul exploited. I'm guessing that was a reference to what Mephisto did to him and Mary Jane. It makes sense that a goddess would feel something like that. And I gotta hand it to her. Aphrodite really knows how to reward people. lol I'm still somewhat confused on the details of this pact they made. She's going to help him with his love life and I'm assuming he'll get plenty of women in his bed. But what is the nature of this pact? And how is Aphrodite going to work around the other gods? Do you intend to get them involved at any point? That would definitely complicate things, but in an awesome sort of way. lol Whatever the case, I look forward to seeing more. Keep up the awesome work, my friend!

    MarvelMaster616
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  • From Daye on April 01, 2013
    So... Spidey screw the marvel universe basically? Could be fun. Some wrong words in there though. Needs a proofread/beta. I'm assuming you meant pact, rather than pack near the end yet.



    “Tell me do you enjoy my body?”

    “I don’t think there is a man alive that would say no,” Peter told her.


    Aside from all those, you know, gay men?
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  • From redsliver on April 01, 2013
    It's good. Very good. I like the idea of Spider-man's mouth starting something that is quickly going to go out of control. Very Spidey. It looks to be a lot of fun.

    Writing wise it seems many of your sentences seem roundabout and wandery. Like they could use a bit of restructuring or commas or just be boiled down into clear precise thoughts. Although there is something in Spider-man taking the long way around a thought that most people come to in a heartbeat.

    Looking forward to more.
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  • From Ryvius on April 01, 2013
    Nice start. Looks to be an entertaining series.

    Good overall keeping with continuity(really glad I read the Spider Island event), liked the Way of the Spider reference and such.

    Not sure if this is gonna be a harem story or something similar, but if it is, aside from the obvious candidates like MJ and Black Cat, I'd personally request Kitty Pryde/Shadow Cat, X23, and maybe for something new an main verse version of White Tiger from the Ultimate Spider-man TV series.

    In any case, great chapter. I look forward to more!
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