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Reviews for Spider's Web Trilogy - The Spider's Bite

By : Shadow-Of-The-Guardian
  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2014
    i would like to see 616 she-hulk
    Carol Danvers doesn't matter which one and power girl
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  • From Tyrinis on July 20, 2014
    Great story. One of the better ones I've seen on here. If I had to throw a name out there to add to the harem... how about Blink from the Exiles?
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  • From AnansiScribe on July 18, 2014
    Welcome back. You've certainly returned in fine form, and one of the things I like about your work is that while there's plenty of sex going on, there's also lots of plot and character development, like Nick Fury comforting Spider-Man (in his own way) after he nearly killed his imposter for killing Captain Stacy. Not to mention Wasp and Black Widow both wanting more of what Peter can give them, and how that complicates their work in the Ultimates and Natasha's ulterior goals and motives. Oh, and the complex web of relationships Peter's already navigating, as his customarily low self-esteem leads him to doubt the girls he's roped into his harem would stick around for the long haul and then trying to comfort Gwen despite her hating Spider-Man for her father's death. You've still got it, and I'm looking forward to more of this story.
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  • From ANON - Spidey_Legend on July 16, 2014
    Another interesting chapter. Now I'm waiting for the comfrontation between Spidey and Natasha.

    BTW. To the harem girls. I would want that Janet is a permament member but it will also be hot seeing Elektra and Sue Storm.
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  • From KaelHyun on July 14, 2014
    Interesting chapter its good to see Spider-man back on the right path. As for who I want I already said that I want to see Doreen Green in the Harem.
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  • From AgentGv01 on July 12, 2014
    Well this was worth the wait, I liked you showing the aftermath of the whole Janet thing, with her state of mind. Although I take it this takes place before Hank put her into the hospital and he was arrested. So will that happen next like he gets pissed and does the same thing, maybe either he suspects she's cheating on him and she won't say with who for instance? Also why is she worried about her biology exactly? She was shown to be a mutant in Utlimate so yeah she was shown to have some wasp like things like the whole eggs stuff but why would that make it hard for Hank to get her pregnant exactly?

    I did enjoy when Natasha confronted her as I bet this will come back soon in interesting ways. And we also saw her own fantasy, I was a bit confused at first but I quickly realized what you were doing and that she had gone into a fantasy again. Although it does seems like she has a thing for domination either dominating someone like that dream or with this herself being dominated.

    The Captain Stacey thing was a nice plot point and I bet this will continue on with the next chapter as it was soon after this when Gwen found out about Peter I believe. Also it seems like Black Widow will be pushed to make a few choices she will have to make soon when she finds out the other people she's working for feel that she's been compromised. So I can't wait to see what happens next as there is a lot going on, plus he never did finish his talk with his ladies either lol.
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  • From ANON - Harbinger_of_Kaos on July 12, 2014
    Well good to see you back, I have to assume that Peter will save Natasha and she can finally have her sought after release? I think that's the one most people have been waiting for.

    As for additional members for his group of ladies, I would go with Betty Brant, Elektra, Sue Storm and Jean Grey. And if you do allow characters from other places Chun Li, Morrigan Aensland, Mai Shiranui.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From Ryvius on July 12, 2014
    Hurray for update! Nice to see this story getting continued!

    Liked the beginning with Wasp and Black Widow. I'm not very knowledgeable about the Ultimate verse, so I gotta ask, was Hank Pym really such an abusive husband? Sound's pretty damn different from the version I'm familiar with.

    Wow, the venom's really starting to take a toll on Natasha. Wonder how much longer she'll be able to hold out?

    Excellent work! Keep it up!


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  • From ANON - L on July 11, 2014
    Is Janet gonna be part of the harem, peter would be such a better option then hank. If your going MvC definetely Morrison and Chun-li and maybe juri Han
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 27, 2014
    Carmilla Black - Scorpion. Melissa Joan Gold - Songbird. Walter Langkowski - Sasquatch. Emil Blonsky - Abomination. Tandy Bowen - Dagger. Tyrone Johnson - Cloak.

    My choice - Black Widow
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on March 06, 2014
    Carmilla Black - Scorpion, Melissa Joan Gold - Songbird, Walter Langkowski - Sasquatch, Emil Blonsky - Abomination, Tandy Bowen - Dagger, Tyrone Johnson - Cloak

    My Choice: Alison Blaire - Dazzler (Ultimate X-Men)
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  • From redsliver on February 03, 2014
    I really wish I could read your story. The plot and ideas behind the word are quite smart and imaginative. I really like watching Spider-man adjust to situations out of his depth. The inclusion of beautiful women filling out his desires and troubles is classic and believable. You have great materials to work with but the quality of your words is just not improving.

    Your biggest problem is run on sentences. Short thoughts carry a lot of weight. Cut back on the conjunctions. Write assertivey. Try not to say everything multiple times. If you don't know if a word or clause is necessary follow this a advice: when in doubt, leave it out.


    I won't be following this story anymore. I wish you the best with those who do.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on February 01, 2014
    Great story so far! Here are my guesses and suggestion:

    Carmilla Black – Scorpion
    Melissa Joan Gold – Songbird
    Walter Langkowski – Sasquatch
    Emil Blonsky – Abomination
    Tandy Bowen – Dagger
    and Tyrone Johnson – Cloak

    I'd like to see Spiderman with Storm (Ororo Monroe), Rogue, and Emma Frost.
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  • From Ryvius on February 01, 2014
    Man! That was a long chapter! I noticed this one felt much bigger in relation to the Ultimate Marvel Universe, with lots of stuff involving Norman Osborn and Nick Fury, plenty of mentions of Captain American, as well as Black Widow and Abdul Al-Rahman (didn't Cap kill him? Eh, must be before that.)

    Did not see the sex scene with Wasp coming, I must say. That said, it was still certainly awesome.

    I couldn't even begin to guess at most of the Sinister Six, and it looks like others have already figured it out, so I'll leave that alone. I'll just be happy when Kitty Pryde/Shadow Cat makes her appearance. Also really looking forward to Spidey learning about Tigra, as well as having encounters with Black Cat and Black Widow.

    As always, I look forward to your future work!
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  • From ANON - Kael on February 01, 2014
    Carmilla Black - Scorpion, Melissa Joan Gold - Songbird, Walter Langkowski - Sasquatch, Emil Blonsky - Abomination (last two I'm switching up simply because there nameing convention demands it.) Tyrone Johnson - Cloak, Tandy Bowen - Dagger. Though I hope C,D, and Quatch don't stay bad.

    as for the Girl she hasn't shown up in the Ultimate Universe yet so you get to be creative: Doreen Green aka Squirrel Girl.
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