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Reviews for Spider's Web Trilogy - The Spider's Bite

By : Shadow-Of-The-Guardian
  • From Snake_King on January 25, 2016
    Interesting chapter. I'm not sure where this is all eventually going to lead, but I do hope that it's a downer or bittersweet ending, as I'm not really in the mood for that.

    Out of curiosity, I don't suppose this might mean that later on Lana will have a fetish for being spanked by her "daddy"? Plus, is there a chance that at least one of the girls could have or develop a preference for anal?
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  • From AgentGv01 on January 23, 2016
    Well I think that chapter went well, I didn't expect the scene with officer Wolf but I think it was a nice addition to things. I take it this was to show when Liz used her powers on purpose for the first time as I think the story already showed she had them earlier but I'm a little vague on that. Can't wait to see what happens next in the story as well.
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  • From AnansiScribe on January 21, 2016
    Welcome back. First off, I'd like to say that those people do not pay enough attention to U.S. and global politics if they think it's unrealistic for the United States to take over entire countries, much less the entire world. They've already been trying, and when you consider the U.S. in most versions of the Marvel Universe, Ultimate included, has pretty much cornered the market on superhuman augmentations, the only thing stopping it from using superhumans to do exactly that is the good conscience of the heroes and the sheer volatility of the villains.

    That aside, the plot is definitely deepening, as Peter's gong to find out sooner or later what's happened with Liz and MJ as a result of him injecting his OZ-laced venom into them too many times and that's going to be a tangle to get through, especially when Janet lets on to him what she's learned about his DNA. The police having a sample of Spider-Man's blood on Elektra's sai and Captain Jeanne DeWolfe being the Kingpin's woman on the inside of the NYPD is likely to complicate things even more, and going to a more personal level of complication . . . I'd like to see how Peter does with being the man in the Bombshells' lives, in both the familial and sexual contexts.

    On a more philosophical note, however, I'd say that when it comes to burdens on/to society, the reason they're called such is that society would usually rather not deal with these people but is forced to for various reasons. For example, we have criminals to be rehabilitated or imprisoned for the good of the law-abiding population and disabled individuals who as citizens and persons are still entitled to the same rights and opportunities as everyone else. Then there are individuals in problematic situations that still have at least human rights, if not civil rights, that need to be addressed when deciding how to deal with them, regardless of political popularity. It's a hard needle to thread by any measure.
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  • From ANON - SomeGuy300 on January 20, 2016
    After seeing this again and reading through it, I can say that things are already in motion. The pieces are almost set and the game about to start. OHHHHH MAN you really got me excited for the next one! Since you combine the sex in the story to make sense but also go a deeper level of connection between characters. Hope to see the next one soon!
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  • From ANON - DarkAvenger88 on January 20, 2016
    Next chapter, could yo do a lemon scene with someone other than Lana and Lori?
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  • From AgentGv01 on August 21, 2015
    Well that was a very good chapter, nice arc with the Black Cat going like in the comics only now Elecktra is out of the picture. Also really enjoyed the sex scene with Janet and it makes sense to have her here to help patch him up as well. So Liz told the others about what's happening with her, that should be interesting to see how that goes and what they do with it.
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  • From ANON - soulhope on August 20, 2015
    i still dont get why the rest of the world thinks the usa wants to take over ruleing it when it is US law that states we cannot forcfuly anex another contory into our own.
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  • From DSTorres on August 17, 2015
    I've been waiting patiently for this update and you did not disappoint me. A very sexy scene between Wasp & Spidey. I particularly loved the conflicting emotions between the two before they gave into their base desires. I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - Elazul on August 17, 2015
    Fun chapter, I don't have much to say besides the fact that I really enjoy the story... so thanks for writing!
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  • From ANON - SomeGuy300 on August 17, 2015
    Hey man, when I first saw this story and read it I was hooked. Every time you created a chapter I was eagerly anticipating the next one. With each chapter you make and all of the events and mysteries that's happening it makes me giddy with anticipation of wanting to know what's next. I am glad to say that you sir are an amazing writer even if it takes some time to get it down. Don't stop, and eagerly waiting for the next one.
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  • From ANON - MasterSir on July 20, 2015
    Love your story for its flawless combination of lemons and story. Having read countless fanfiction I only have read one other Author who could do this (Slyfer101) and both you have extreme talent. I also applaud you for how you have peter taking control of his harem with out going completely evil puppet master this as well as the bdsm elements you bring into play makes this easily one of my top ten maybe five depending on my mood and I constantly wait for your next chapter so please write SOON!
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  • From AgentGv01 on April 22, 2015
    Well it's been awhile since I heard from you so I was worried something happened but glad to see you managed to post this. It was a good chapter that had a lot of character development in it as we get to see a lot of Black Widow's past as well as Karla's and we see how much of a major manipulator she is, you really pulled that off well with her character in how she can get into the heads of others and mess with them just like in the comics.
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  • From AnansiScribe on April 21, 2015
    Welcome back. And rather intriguing setup here as you depict Karla's and Natasha's analyses of the situations they're in and their manipulations to ensure that they both end up on top, or at least end up surviving. Poor Songbird's going to be in for a crash when she realizes how much Karla used and lied to her. Intrigued by the twists you've put on Karla, Songbird, and Cloak and Dagger --- what with the latter two apparently being drug dealers in this version. Then again, you probably came up with this before the canon Ultimate Cloak and Dagger debuted in the Ultimate Spider-Man comics, so I don't really mind, and it is a pretty interesting twist on their original backstory, that they got their powers from having designer drugs tested on them. Looking forward to seeing how this all turns out, especially with what Karla's psychoanalysis of Spider-Man might be.
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  • From Tomturtle on February 06, 2015
    Really enjoyed this story, one of the best spider man harem story along with (Dark Urges, side of effects, and life is a game). I'm very glad your moving the story along. Something I don't understand though with the number of time he inject Liz her powers should have more visible effect by now nice twist on the twin thing and I don't know if you said it or not but is the bombshells powers going to grow or change? Anyway great work and keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Ron on January 08, 2015
    That waw a worldwide chapter it was a awesome read .I hope Gwin joins soon I can't wait to to what happens next between them all and to them all next .I hope he can make all four Mary's good and stop killing people.
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