Reviews for Rise of the Storm

BY : Trinity

  • From MarvelFan98 on April 19, 2012

    Hey. Good start so far. This seems like it could be an interesting story. There's not to much to it so far so there's not much to comment on. Although I think it might be helpful if you made it more clear who was speaking. There's a few lines where it can be hard to tell, especially when there's a lot of people in the room at once. Anyways looking forward to reading more, keep it up.

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