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Reviews for Festival of X

By : marvelmaster616
  • From MF22 on July 14, 2014
    I may not like Emma, but her treatment throughout the fic just screams rape. It doesn't matter if she gave permission. What the X-Men and the Zodiacs did to her was disgraceful, and speaks very poorly of them as the supposed "good guys" and Human beings in general. For all Emma's faults, they sure stooped pretty damn low themselves. And for what? To atone for her sins? Couldn't there have been a more practical manner than being raped? And of course Amara wouldn't classify it as such. She doesn't want to be compared to her less than honorable relative. Yet she not only commissioned a gangbang/rape, but actually watched it, doing nothing to stop it. The ONLY saving grace is that Emma got to have her way afterwards. But despite that, I'm struggling to get past the whole rape thing. In my mind, this cannot be justified, even if she gave her consent.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 01, 2013
    You should write an Avengers vs X-Men type orgy next!
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  • From MarvelFan98 on October 08, 2013
    This story was amazing from start to finish. Every chapter was amazingly well done and I always looked forward to reading more. I hope you continue to write more in the future, I'm sure whatever it is whether it's a continuation of this story or a new one it will be great. Until then congratulations on an amazing story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 06, 2013
    The next orgy whould be X men vs. Avengers themed
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  • From AgentGv01 on October 05, 2013
    Well all good things have to end and I think you covered pretty much all the major points if there was anything left it was most likely just little things that wouldn't have changed much. It was a good story and I enjoyed it and I felt you ended it on a good note as well. I do hope so see a bit more from this world at some point when you get some ideas but that's up to you. All in all it was a good time and I can't wait for whatever story you come up with next. Ending with the couples and then the singles also having some fun of their own made sense.
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  • From redsliver on October 05, 2013
    You have crafted a magnificent piece of writing here. I loved where and how you went through the celebration showing us much but not everything. I highly enjoy the hedonism and decadence, especially in that you kept them ubiquitous and secondary to emotion and character.

    Personally I was missing Beast. He has always been a favorite of mine. I enjoyed his epilogue inclusion.

    Bravo, congratulations on reaching the end.
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  • From MarvelFan98 on September 09, 2013
    As always this is a great new chapter. I really liked Rogue and Nightcrawler playing with the boundaries of what's appropriate though it did seem a little rushed. And the Mystique chapter was really nice, I liked how it was pretty much a bunch of mini scenes, it made for a really interesting story. I can;t wait to see what you have planned for the final chapter. Whatever it is I'm sure it will be great.
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  • From AgentGv01 on September 08, 2013
    Well that was an interesting chapter with them exploring Mystique's past loves (that we know about at least) and how each and every one of them would be different from her memories of them as well. Then of course all of them each getting a piece of her since I bet they all needed a little payback for all the things she's done over the years. Well for the most of them, I don't think guys like Namor really ever interacted with her before at least not that I know of.

    The Kurt and Rogue scene was nice although it seemed a little quick for some reason as it was over pretty fast, I also think you missed out on a reference there given that one of Kurt's old girlfriends Amanda had been his foster sister as well so it's not like Rogue would have been the first.

    Anyways one last romp for them all huh? I wonder if you'll try out some new couples with this or new relationships. I would like to see Mystique and Bobby some more for the final part with some shape shifting fun. Like say shifting her tongue to be really long was something I don't think you've tried out with her before. Plus it will be interesting to see this story end and what you do after it. Maybe have one last scene between Hank and Agent Brand since there's isn't much about them and it would be nice to see a bit more of them before the end.
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  • From redsliver on September 07, 2013
    As always you give us another chapter of brightly and vividly illustrated sex. I also quite enjoy your near abuse of dropping the words uncanny and astonishing.
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  • From ANON - Harbinger of Kaos on September 06, 2013
    So any chance we can see more Hellion/X23, Iceman/Mystique or possibly see him with Emma in a solo setting or in a threeway with the two? Also what do you plan next? More X-men romps? Or expand into Marvel?
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  • From Royboy on August 26, 2013
    Another smoking hot chapter, MM616! Wonderful to see Rogue in some hot group action and I love that you're playing with that line between who the characters can fuck and who they can't.
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  • From AgentGv01 on August 02, 2013
    Well this certainly was an entertaining chapter and I hope Mystique stays to the end of this chapter and we do see some more family fun with with just the four of them or just the family would make for something since there are a few things you haven't had Mysique do yet such as take the forms of many others or alter her natural blue body as well.I was also wondering how you would have set this up and I think it was done well, having it been Bobby's idea and his help in it I think was a good touch.
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  • From ANON - Halibelstwin on July 04, 2013
    Can I throw out an idea? Can Kurt get himself a good spot in a chapter as a tribute to his memory in the comics? He's not only my favorite character but many people loved him as well and I think he deserves it. The idea is Nightcrawler has his moment with Betsy, Domino, and Jean/Amara/Lorna/Storm (One of those four for the last woman anyway. Didn't include Emma because she might be off doing her own thing but then again Kurt was pretty gentle with her GB and maybe she noticed that?) and they are all wearing flowing whit robes like angels (Heh heh get it?) I think it might be a nice little tribute to out favorite elf's memory.
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  • From AgentGv01 on June 22, 2013
    Well the new chapter was worth the wait and I liked the use of psychic powers in the Emma scene given if she took every man herself her would be too sore to do anything after it and it kind of reminded me of that scene in X-Men First Class movie as in that film she did something similar. Although I think you use the exclamation mark a little too often sometimes especially in this chapter as I felt you overused it. Plus you were repeating yourself a lot with the 'It was something [person] would wear' maybe have a unique thing for each person. Like "it was something he would have liked to have seen Ororo in once" and "it was something she once wore" just to name a few ways you could have done that without repeating. Plus I felt some of the things were stuff that they hadn't worn and should maybe have been either something the men had fantasized about or it reminded them of someone else.

    With the Cockooes I'm surprised given their usually linked minds that they didn't share each other's experiences with the others to enhance the sex so that while they waited they could at least feel the sex one of their sisters was getting, plus more than one of them with Scott at the same time. But overall it wasn't bad and a good intro for them into this story.
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  • From MarvelFan98 on June 22, 2013
    Great new update.The cuckoos were done very well but it might have been interesting to see them all more involved rather then having two of them just watching while one of them was with Scott. Having Emma use her telepathy to be with each of the guys at the same time was really interesting as well. Overall it was all a very good read. I noticed you saved the three X-men with the biggest connections to Mystique for her chapter. Can't wait to see what else you have planned.
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