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Reviews for X3: The Ace Of Spades

By : BlackWodin
  • From DrunkenScotsman on August 19, 2009
    I had a feeling that you might start up a Piotr-Kitty thing - Bobby certainly screwed up big-time by jumping the gun w/ Kitty while still technically with Rogue. No biggie - I'm gonna plug my own fic, "Heat of the Moment." That said, I'm still glad to see that he's manning up. :D

    Not a bad fight scene - I like how you really incorporated the changes into the Alcatraz scene. Some bits were better than others, but all in all a good AU of X3's finale. Keep up the good work!
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  • From Jennyt82 on August 12, 2009
    Another fantastic chapter, i don't really know what else to say other than keep going and update soon.
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  • From DrunkenScotsman on August 12, 2009
    Excellent! I'm glad my previous review didn't come across as "Iceman - ur doin it wrong!" I was quite pleased at the apparent beginning of maturity in the boy, and I'll pretend for my own vanity that I was the impetus for it. :D That it required so many 'cold shoulders' to shape up the Iceman is ironically delicious. Keep up the good work, and get well soon!

    MDF
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  • From inuyoukaigirl1984 on August 11, 2009
    Wonderful story!! I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm sorry to hear about your fall. Hope you get to feeling back up to par soon! I feel so sorry for Ororo. She loves Logan so much, but his eyes are set on Jean. I really hope things work out in that situation. And whoohoo for the Romy!!
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  • From DrunkenScotsman on August 04, 2009
    Great fic - I love how you write Gambit, and the chapter where Rogue absorbed Carol brought me to tears. I've eagerly awaited every update of this fic since I first saw it, since it addresses a severe lack of Cajun in the films.

    It may be too late at this point, but I would like to make a case for something that I'm less than thrilled about in your fic: Iceman. I'm guessing you're intending to make him a sort of 'villain' by making him a complete tool, but - to me, at least - the way you've written him doesn't really jive w/ the movie version of Bobby; I have a hard time seeing your version of Bobby to be the same one that created a rose made out of ice in X1. I'd hoped you'd have him get his act straight a few chapters back, but I get that you needed him to really shove Rogue away. I'd simply like to request that - as much as you can, since Bobby's an ancillary character in this tale - try not to make Bobby as much of a total jerk-loser and thus a bit more likable. Perhaps the ostracism seen in the latest chapter (ch. 17) might put him on the path of not-jerkiness?

    I hope you'll consider my input as constructive criticism, as that is how it's intended. I'm excited to see the remainder of the fic - all 30-40 chapters of it. :D

    MDF
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  • From Jennyt82 on August 02, 2009
    Longer for this story is definitely better. It just keeps getting better and better. I love the story and i love you for writing it. But now that you've committed to a longer story you have to finish it otherwise i'll be distraught. lol. Update soon.
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  • From OmegaX on July 30, 2009
    Damn, but then again, I'm a speed reader, so it doesn't feel like overlong chapters...


    Anyway! Carol finally got to layith the smackdown upon her father, so to speak, Remy finally got to ask Rogue out on a date, Rogue learned to fly, and finally, the rebirth of Jean as the Phoenix,

    Overall, a good chapter, can't wait for the first date, and the hopeful return of Prof. Gambit! (Why could I see a more perverse usage of that title in Rogue's dreams?)
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  • From Jennyt82 on July 27, 2009
    Congratulations on another fantastic chapter and WOW, longer than most published novels, that deserves some praise!! Congrats again. Hopefully, see you next week.
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  • From ANON - LoverOrEros on July 26, 2009
    Hey, I just want to say, you updated just as I got online to check for new updates, weird huh? lol

    Anyway. I was almost afraid you were going to follow the Jean storyline word for word from the movie, but it looks like you're going to fix it lol.

    Can't wait tp read more!
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  • From OmegaX on July 24, 2009
    Are you sure, because I could have sworn that I saw alarm clocks ruined in this chapter?

    Anyway, sickeningly late review, but naturally, the more ROMY, the more I love it!

    We gonna have a return of Professor Gambit any time soon?
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  • From morwen4re on July 20, 2009
    Aw! That was soo cute! Just the bit of sweetness I needed to end my day. And just wondering, are you going to bring up the fact that Creed is Sabertooth's and Mystic's son at all?
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  • From Jennyt82 on July 19, 2009
    Romy, romy, romy! Yay! This chapter made me very happy. I love the progression in their relationship, i still hate Bobby, but i'm happy he's out of the picture now. Fantastic chapter! The end was amazingly cute, loved it. Spoil us with weekly updates while you can, i understand that when term starts again you'll be busy so update very, very soon.
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  • From inuyoukaigirl1984 on July 18, 2009
    Whoohoo!! I'm so excited to see the story updated!! I truly love it!! I Can't wait til the next chapter comes out. Keep up the great work!!
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  • From LoverOfEros on July 12, 2009
    Amazing! the detail of the characters is awesome! I love it. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From inuyoukaigirl1984 on July 12, 2009
    WHOOHOO!!!! So cool. Rogue's better, she told of Bobby, and Remy wants desperately to kiss her. *blissful sigh* Great story! It's so wonderful!
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