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Reviews for The Worst Shade of Green

By : Nghtcrwlr
  • From akathetoad on February 18, 2010
    Hey there, nice story! Glad to see another Toad fan! By crazy coincidence I did this very same plotline in a roleplay recently! Great minds think alike, I guess? Crazy! Get out of my heaaad!!! Heehee.

    Just a couple of constructive criticisms: A few spelling errors (who doesn't have those?) and I noticed you changed the characters ages from chapter to chapter (from 28-41 and 14-15). Callie's emotional state (while understandably turbulent) seemed also to flip-flop exceptionally. While I can totally see the Stockholm thing happening (and who wouldn't want to with Toad, mmm? I mean if he tied me up I'd call him Daddy ;-) )but her overwhelming love for him seemed really easy in acquiring. I for one would have liked to see a little more psychological manipulation before she became his willing slave.

    But don't get me wrong; I loved it! Great job with Toad, especially, so few people get him right! Keep up the good work! :-)
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  • From ANON - duce on February 04, 2009
    wow what an intersting turn of events, wonder what is going to happen now that the mother in law is in the house!!! can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - duce on January 13, 2009
    that was so sad and very unexpected. wow that was some chapter. I feel so bad for the way Toad treats her. Hope to read the next chapter soon. always checking for an update
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  • From ANON - duce on January 06, 2009
    wow very intense chapter, can't wait to read the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Bodo on December 18, 2008
    That is strong... but good. I like Toad and I think that he can be really cruel but inside he is just lonely.
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  • From estelin on December 02, 2008
    this was excellent. i hope there is more. i would laugh if there is a love/trust relationship building as well as if they have a kid
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 22, 2008
    wow, that was a very intense chapter
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