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Reviews for New Blood

By : marvelmaster616
  • From ANON - Farah Egan on September 02, 2008
    Hey slickboy I love the sexual graphics in your stories. They are so detailed right down to the core and they make me so hot and kinda horny. Sometimes I get wet just reading some of your x-men adult fan fictions. And it makes me wonder what kind of guy you are and how you are in bed. I can only imagine how 'creative' you are during sex. Maybe if you dont mind, I can give you my number sometime later? Let me know. Well keep the great stories coming. I'll be reviewing more very soon
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  • From ANON - Harry M VanHoudnos on August 29, 2008
    A very interesting chapter. I see that Hank McCoy has become a mixture of the Beast from the X-Men titles as well as the Beast from the AOA timeline. His working relationship with Sinister is going to be one that will bring much success, but also a great deal of pain in it, I'm afraid. But, this might actually work out well for both men. It gives Sinister someone to double check his work, and it gives Hank a chance to put that brain of his to use!

    As for Magneto, I think that while his goals are honorable, his way of going at it are WRONG! He needs to learnt that force is NOT always the best way! And Raven is going to be the one, with the pawns, to teach him that.

    Gambit and Storm: One of my favorite couples in the X universe. Those two work SO well together! They should hook up and do some jobs together, to see who truly is the best thief!

    Russian mob: I smell Piotr Rasputin and Illyana showing up in the near future. And if Illyana shows up, then A) Selene will finally have her protegee and B) Kitty Pryde is going to be showing up soon as well!

    Catch you next Friday when you update again!

    Harry M VanHoudnos

    harryV3rd@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Harry M VanHoudnos on August 26, 2008
    Well, I can see that Sinister is going to have a new lab assistant soon. And while Selene did her part to bring Warren over, I still have my doubts about how well its going to work. And it was a pleasure to see Storm and Mystique on speaking terms as well. I will be looking forward to the rest of this story as it comes out on both FF.net and here.
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  • From ANON - Harry M VanHoudnos on August 26, 2008
    Wow! Talk about a steamy chapter! I can see that Jean is definetly making a move to become the next queen of the Hellfire club with Scott at her side. And while Selene may not like it, Jean definetly is more of Emma's protege than hers.
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  • From ANON - Harry M VanHoudnos on August 25, 2008
    I followed your link from FF.net to here to read the story. I like the extra details you put in, about them feeling like they were being watched, how Xavier, by way of Sage, got them to follow through on what he wanted. Now, they are in the club, and it is time for them to find out just WHAT they are getting into!
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  • From Lightning on August 22, 2008
    nice big difference in this than on ffnet keep it up
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  • From ANON - lol on August 18, 2008
    Uh...instead of feeling violated and scared, they become sex machines. Ooookay....
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  • From Lightning on August 15, 2008
    great i noticed a few changes mostly at the end any way keep it up hope you have the next chapter ready soon.
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  • From Lightning on August 09, 2008
    Big difference from the one on FFnet i thought i was alot better keep up the good work
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  • From on August 09, 2008
    chapter 2: see told ya reviews would pick up a bit more later on. I got to say though the unedited version has got some major sex scenes to it. The whole orgy thing was nicely done although I'm amazed they could walk straight and Jean could talk her jaw had to be sore as hell too, not to mention Scott totally drained as well. I have to wonder what else will they experience as time goes on too. Although I have to wonder how frustrated Sage and Selene were, watching all that had to get something in them fired up.

    Anyways I can't wait to see what you got in store for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Vegeta Himura on August 09, 2008
    Well...... I have to say I'm impressed..... I'd say you planned that out pretty well.... Wrote it wonderfully too. The first part actually reminded me of Bible Black, in a good way of course :P No, but seriously, keep up the great work. This is already the best story I've read in a long time, and It's only got two chapters. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Vegeta Himura on August 05, 2008
    Amazing, as always/ I can really already see how Xavier got to be how he is. It's not often that I can see him in an evil mood, mostly probably because I don't look, but eh... I really enjoy your writings, ever since I saw Hellfire and Brimstone. That's still the best fanfiction I've ever read. Because of that, I wanted to see how this would go. Already I'm impressed and delighted with what you've done. My only complaint is a couple of spelling/grammar errors strewn about, but overall, there aren't many. Keep up the good work and update soon!!
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  • From on August 03, 2008
    well it's exactly like in ff.net but I just hope we see major differences in this version on this site and I know that when you get the more adult content in here the reviews will pick up.
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  • From Lightning on August 02, 2008
    hey great story i couldn't see much diffence in this chapter than on the one from FFN keep up the good work
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