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Reviews for Grey Frost

By : marvelmaster616
  • From ANON - Panther-Strife on November 21, 2012
    At the moment of the destruction of Genosha, Frost manifested a secondary mutation giving her the ability to transform her body into organic diamond. In this form, Frost is translucent and retains mobility while being almost invulnerable, and able to support incredible amounts of weight, though different writers have shown varying accounts of her strength. Her diamond form was at least strong enough for her to tear out of bonds and, in a single punch, send Lady Mastermind soaring across a room and straight through a wall.

    Emma's diamond body is virtually tireless as she does not produce fatigue poisons and has no need for water nor food. She is also numbed from emotion, pain and empathy, impervious to cold, and resistant to heat in this form. Despite this high level of invulnerability, her diamond form has a single molecular flaw, which if exploited – such as being shot with a diamond bullet – can cause her body to shatter. Though the exact location of the flaw in her diamond body has not been stated outright, clues point to it being located in between her eyes.

    Frost's full range of abilities between her diamond state and regular form have been inconsistent; however, later occurrences depict that Frost cannot access her psychic powers in diamond form, explained by different writers as either a distinct genetic flaw or suppression by her diamond form's adamantine luster. Depictions have also stated that Emma has a degree of telepathic immunity while in diamond form, though the extent of this immunity has been portrayed inconsistently as well, ranging from total shielding from psychic invasion to vulnerability to psychic attack. Her diamond form is also stated to emit low-level ultraviolet light, causing it to glow in darkness.

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  • From BlazinAtsuma on October 23, 2007
    I loved the whole story that you have written. All of your stories were great actually... So what is going to happen to the two couples after this. I have a question what would it of been like if Jean/Scott/Emma would have been a three way relationship... They would of both hadaman that loves them and he loves both of them... Just a question I had
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  • From greywolf2700 on October 05, 2007
    This story rocked! I can't wait to read more. I there is sequel?
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  • From ANON - Claire on September 11, 2007
    That had to be the worst ending of one of your stories I've ever read. I love your stories (save the very poor use of psionic terminology) but what started out a great story turned into a forced ending.
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  • From Lightning on September 10, 2007
    great chapter i'm glad emma is getting on with her life now. I'm really sad that this story is over since i think its was one of the best you've posted on this site. Anyway are you planing to write another story like this that follows on from this one any way what ever you write i can't wait to read it keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - unsurprised on September 06, 2007
    So Scott and Jean have feelings for each other...again. What else is new? This fic sucked.
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  • From ANON - Crystal on September 05, 2007
    awww, that was sweet. i look forward to the epilogue =)
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  • From on September 05, 2007
    well nice to see that they finally managed to get together and move on, well it's been a great story and I can't wait until the final chapter comes out to see how it all ends. Personally I think this has become one of your better fics, I'm glad you didn't stop it when you wanted to.
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  • From ANON - Shane on August 30, 2007
    Dude not much gets me but this did not in some perve way i was sad when emma left i liked her and scott together but jean literaly is made for scott so i guess it is the right thing to have them end up together. awesome story i cant wait for some more.
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  • From Lightning on August 29, 2007
    great chapter its sad that emma is leaving the story she was really good i had thought you were going to keep her in but i guess not. any way are you going to do another story that links in with this one. i think that would be a good idea.
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  • From ANON - likewhocares on August 29, 2007
    Ummm...oh..wow...another Scott/Jean fiction from you. I was way surprised you put up with the Rogue/Scott Evo fic, but not this one! First you make Scott look like an asshole, and then you make Emma retarded, and then you make Jean a complete dope!! Dumb...shocked....not...it was obvious...
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  • From on August 29, 2007
    Well I knew this was coming but still it was an emotional chapter. I wonder how the others will deal with the news when they hear this and of course they would want the reasons why she left as well. But I guess the next one is the final chapter? Or second last maybe kind of depends on things anyway can't wait for the ending.
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  • From Lightning on August 22, 2007
    Great chapter man I knew that you have an Emma/Scott/Jean scene in this story. Any way I feel sorry for Emma been in love with Scott but she is only second to him. Any way can’t wait to find out what Emma say to Scott next keep up the good work.
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  • From Lightning on August 15, 2007
    great chapter i thought this bond that Jean and Scott share would have been blocked by Emma. Any way i thought emma and Jean would have been needed to talk alot more about what happened to them both, by the way are there going to be any more long time effects happing to jean i mean she went through more than what emma went throught, can't wait to see keep up the good work.
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  • From on August 15, 2007
    Chapter 20

    Well that was a nice little chapter wrapping up the Hellfire club members as it will take them time to get out of prison knowing them and teir high price laywers they could drag things out for a long time.

    Anyways I think maybe it should have been mentioned that expeience with the three of them could also had been from when Emma and Jean linked minds. Since doing something like that I think it makes sense to be a bit more attuned to things, and then when you get in the stress, chemicals and other things, I feel it was a combination of all of that. Plus I'm surprised you had Jean pick that up since the last time you tried that it only caused problems with the story.
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