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Reviews for Reformed Sinner or Expecting the unexpected

By : EleniD
  • From ANON - Thesaurus Addiction is No Joke on May 10, 2014
    It's interesting that you mention a thesaurus in this story a few times, considering it's quite obvious that you frequently make use of your own, as there are some odd usage errors throughout this story. As someone who also writes, I understand the need to avoid repetitive use of the same words, but you have to make sure that the alternate word you find actually means what you think it means. The words listed in a thesaurus have *similar* definitions, but they do not all have the *exact same* definition, and are not often completely interchangeable. Subtle differences in meaning become more obvious in context, so be aware that you may need to look up the new word you want to use in the dictionary to make sure it's a good fit before inserting it into your story.

    There are some other technical/grammatical errors that perhaps a beta-reader or paying closer attention to spell-check might help you to catch, but none of this hides the fact that you have a gift for story telling, so keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Cofworlds on March 15, 2012
    Love your story I think the characters are at an exceptionable OC level. Thanks for writing it I am in despite need of Hank stories and I saw this one. I said hell why not and well I will say this I am liking it.
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  • From Jags on August 06, 2009
    That was really good! very hot love scenes. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Yumme on May 12, 2009
    Moments after posting, I gave in and read the rest. So much for pacing. Thank you for the wickedly good stories. I doubt there's a more elaborate, inclusive and satisfying X-men fanfiction out there. Did I mention sexy? I meant to. Sexy.
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  • From ANON - Yumme on May 12, 2009
    After reading the first six chapters in one night, I've been struggling to pace myself through the rest. I have a feeling I'll just end up rereading the entirety when I've read the last chapter. Its been intense.
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  • From Leeana69 on December 29, 2008
    Holy flurting Kurt, Batman.

    XDDD
    I hope victor gets better. ;_;
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  • From ANON - Cannibalized_Society on June 25, 2008
    I have to say that although the pairings were unique to me and the multi-partner grouping is not usually something I go in for, I was impressed by this. The humor was genuine, the characters were believeable, and there was nothing trite about it (something I've noticed with several x-fics). I applaude your ability to keep the characters real and as IC as possible. ALSO! I have to say that (although I've seen it a couple of times before) you managed to make Logan a sub character without removing any of his masculinity. again, kudos for that. I was also pleased with your portrayal of Nightcrawler, as he is my favorite fuzzy blue elf. I'm glad that you kept his sense of humor and fun even after the smut. I've noticed a tendency for angst in nightcrawler fics after the smut has been had either because of who he was boffing or because of his religious beliefs. I noticed very little of Kurt's catholicism, but I didn't exactly miss it either. Than you for not making him a whiney bitch. o_o; I plan to keep reading your work though if this is any indicator of what you have to offer, you'll recieve more satisfied reviews from me.
    PS: I did notice some minor spelling errors but the grammar and organization is wonderfully intact. Again I thank you for knowing how to form a proper sentence.
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  • From ANON - xiusk on May 11, 2008
    My My i love this it's so sad at some points and you really feel for Hank but his love making :D
    As I love all four of these characters and would have loved to find a fic involving all four of them some time ago this is like a fantasy of a fantasy come true. Great job keep it up (and reviews tend to help self-esteem anyways) and i'll be readin' more of your work

    xiusk (sorry weird name: yes do i care?: no)

    P.S you continuously use too when you should be using to and that mistake always ticks me off, try to fix that wouldja?
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  • From xireth on March 16, 2007
    sdlknvsle. HEY YOU.

    I read this before~ and I got bored so I went to re-read a bunch of Kurt fics-- this one too [ meaning it's you, know, good. *REVIEW PART* ]. AND I WENT LIKE HEY IT'S THE PERSON WITH THE STUFF! xD

    *articulate*

    LOOVEEEE.
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  • From ANON - Chicken on November 10, 2006
    Whoa, I don't know why that one made me dizzy. Man, you are damn good at this K. The last two were great, I loved 'em. I just ain't happy that it's over. *tries to pout*

    It just dont work. Don't worry, I'll be working on the ideas for my coming chapters the whole time. *Promise*
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  • From ANON - Gimpy on November 09, 2006
    Aww, that was so cute. Poor Hank, limping around, and Victor lossing a tooth is funny. Great Story, Thanx for the read
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  • From ANON - Lina on November 09, 2006
    ::Sniffles:: Life... it comes to us all, even mutants. Ahhhhhh... what a wonderful story this has been. Thank you KD, thank you. ::rides of into the sunset::
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 09, 2006
    Awww! The Prologue was soooo sweet! I WANT that sequel!
    I can't believe how well you made them interact in Chapter 13 and the part about Hank being touch starved...it was just *sigh*...it was realisic and charming. It's nearly half past one now...so please don't be disappointed by the shortness of this one...but I simply can't think straight anymore...even I need some sleep.
    Dendey
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  • From Dendey on November 08, 2006
    Wild abandon...that's what. Hank was still restraining himself. That's sooo sad, he truly shouldn't've done that, but he did and not there's nothing we can do about it anymore...'Sides making sure to kick him in the ass if Creed let's him get away with anything under five minutes the next time, because I definitely think this should happen more often! It's good for Hank, it's good for Victor, even if it's confusing him and it's even more confusing for Kurt and Logan. The fact that Victor accidentally broke the arm of the little girl...I find it astounding how you managed to draw the picture of a Victor who's actually careing enough to try and help the kid, but still so unused to it that he tries so hard that he actually manages to do some unintended damage. Or maybe he even planned it and just chose the lesser evil? Allright, plan is the wrong term, more like silently considered the possibilities and acted like instinct suggested would be best. Of course I liked the smut in the middle of the chapter, especially the part of Logan leaving his hand on Hanks thigh! That was just sooo adoring! But I have to say that...you are right, you are a little bit hard on Kurt at the moment...not emotionally like with Hank, but he's still a bit unsure as to how to act best and he's trying to squash that insecurity with seducing his intendeds...well, two of them anyway. But I will wait until the time comes and he can openly operate on three fronts, simultaneously! (Or is that too much to ask?)
    I hope this review is still long enough for your tastes! If not tell me and I'll re-read everything and comment again!
    Ciao
    Dendey
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  • From ANON - Chicken on November 08, 2006
    *Dances merrily with computer chair* I gots more cookies!! *wipes crumbs away* Ok, seriously...I shed tears for little (ok not little) Hankie. Is happiness really so hard to accept?

    I'll have to kick out my next chapter soon, after Fri I'm outta commission for two weeks. The whole being in the middle of nowhere with no technological gizmos in order to visit relatives thing.
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