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By : marvelmaster616
  • From ANON - Jenskott on January 15, 2006
    Chapter Six

    This part was very funny. I can see they're practically glowing. Still I think they were a tad TOO obvious. They should be more careful or they'll be caught.

    I like a lot ^_^. I want reading more.
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  • From ANON - x00001 on January 14, 2006
    great chapter looks like jean still got problems can't wait to see how she gets over them
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  • From ANON - alrischa on January 13, 2006
    Hmm...Victoria's Secret eh? The next chapter is going to be very interesting. I wonder if Scott is actually going to recognise the colour purple. ;)
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  • From ANON - wen on January 13, 2006
    lol they will see the two of them strangely happy at the same time, there will have gossip
    Lol about the sense of humour
    yes there look must have worth the move lol, maybe if Jean erases their mind after? lol
    Well done Jean, it's plausible, well even if they should have heard them lol
    I hope that Logan won't come in Scott's room lol
    You must tell Jean that you love her Scott
    ARGH Scott, SHOWER !!
    beware there is ears everywhere in this mansion!
    And Scott had forgotten to shower....well Logan hadn't pick up anything about them before they made love...
    LOL Jean will buy sexy underwears...
    ALERT LOGAN IS THERE !
    I think Ororo has understood the reason of their good mood, but I don't think that Logan would like the idea of "friend with benefits" as me, I think he would rather "like" them to have had sex because of love.
    One point for Wen, Ororo knew
    ah? Scott had showered finally ?
    Great Jean, that's leave you alone for your shopping!
    Wen

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  • From ANON - Agent-G on January 13, 2006
    Chapter 6

    Very cool morning after chapter, I really liked seeing them after that last one. Although they may want to tone it down while around others if they don't want them to find out. While alone they can do whatever they wanted but they may need to put up an 'act' as it were to keep them guessing. I do look forward to the next chapter since Jean seems to be doing a little 'fun' shoping. I'm guessing the more she gets into this that she'll eventually gather the strength to try and look up a sex shop later on lol. Maybe buy that 'Black Queen' outfit from the comics there.
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  • From ANON - x00001 on January 07, 2006
    great chapter i really liked the bit at the beginning o how jean worked up to ask him that was good keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - wen on January 06, 2006
    Well at least he's still also perturbated by those dreams, but he's taking rather bad his break up
    Oh man Jean, what will she say...I hope she won't have the time to, that feelings and desire will come first... Just speak about the dreams, and he'll realize that you were having the same...
    Oh man she said it...
    Tell him you love him!
    For what you can tell...or feel Jean ? lol Yeah that what I thought lol
    But expresse your mutuals feelings for crying out loud, it'd be better for both of you even if it's still more a love making than just sex
    If nobody has heard them they're lucky lol
    You're perfect as lovers because you love each other!
    But "friend with benefits" overall when one of them yet knows he loves the other, it's like being used!
    For me it's not friendship anymore since they made love, it's too strange. I know it was yet the case in your other fic, I mean, they weren't in love at first, but they didn't know eachother, there it's not the same
    CARRY ON
    JOTT FOREVER !
    Wen
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  • From ANON - alrischa on January 06, 2006
    Damn, finally! That is all. :p
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on January 06, 2006

    Part Five

    It was about time! I liked how you set up the dialogue. I can tell it took a lot work.

    A great sex scene. Worth of the long wait. Though, I doubt Jean had felt pain when her hymen broke. In fact, given that it's a thin menbrane uses to disintegrate alone in the adolescency, with some physical exercise -for example, go cycling-, it's likely it had dissapeared for then (Jean is eighteen and she wroks out daily).


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  • From ANON - Agent-G on January 06, 2006
    Chapter 5

    Well I like how you had Jean approach this and gave him the options she did that really worked out well for the plot of the story and what you wrote earlier. Very cool sex scene althougth for a bit more realism maybe have them at least take a few minutes to warm up lol. But hey you can ignore that if you want anyway just a thought. Although they would be sore as hell the next day, plus I have to wonder if they'll gete caught the enxt day by Logan's nose? That is if they can get to the showers before they meet him.
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  • From ANON - Jotty on January 06, 2006
    wow!!! tats all i hv to say... wow!!!
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  • From ANON - alrischa on January 03, 2006
    Eep! Cliffhanger! :p Let them get on with it already! It's been too long! Also, I can't wait to see what Scott's reaction to this will be. :D

    Actually, come to think of it, I wouldn't doubt that Jean owned thongs. But hey, you're the author. ;)
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  • From ANON - RedPhoenix1821 on December 30, 2005
    OH MAN! Please don't tell me i have to wait that long for the next chapter! That was so good and it only makes me more anxious for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Jotty on December 30, 2005
    urghhh! Cliffy! eek! Hurry!
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  • From ANON - wen on December 30, 2005
    Jean was tempted to say yes to Duncan when he asked her if she was taking him for a moron, I did it at her place lol
    Lol for Duncan reaction, I'm sure he'll say that he is the one who broke with her, but what does he have in mind ? I knew he would turned the things! he's so predictable
    Scott must be deligthed to hear the new !
    oh is he breaking up with Taryn too ? LOL it's about the rumor !!! God Scott, Jean has break up with Duncan, how can you call it a bad week ?
    Jean: "What" ? (YES !!!!) lol
    Hmm Jean, you'll be here to comfort him, even if he'll realized that he and Taryn it was nothing
    How Jean can be so sure it will happen this night ?
    AAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH how can you leave us here ! you better carry on and update soon !
    JOTT FOREVER !!
    Wen
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