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Reviews for Hot Babes Hot Nights

By : ennsaiyn
  • From wildrose31 on November 03, 2005
    Wow...I love itmso much. I hope you keep it up.
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  • From ANON - john the heavy on October 19, 2005
    Logan's a frickin pimp in this fic! ^^ Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Big Samurai on October 07, 2005
    I have been a big Wolverine fan since ... the 1980s? Oof. I feel old. That being said, this is a good piece of light reading. Other readers have commented on things that need to be fixed in the text, and I do not feel the need to repeat those comments, but I am going to tell you what I like and dislike about the story.

    The big thing is that Wolverine has a certain image as a repressed hornball, and your story plays out one way that he might unleash that from time to time. What he initially says is very true: He is almost always surrounded by extremely attractive young women! No one is going to blame him for having bad thoughts ... except Cyclops, perhaps, but that is another story. I admit that I do have a hard time picturing Wolverine as any kind of writer, but he did know Ernest Hemingway during World War II, so he might have picked up a lesson or two from him. Who can really say?

    One thing that made me laugh: Putting the classic comment ― you know the one ― at the end of each installment. Normally, when Wolverine says that, it is because he is getting into a fight, not because he is macking on one of his teammates, but ... there is no reason he could not be good at that, too. Do not forget the original ending to the quote, though: “... and what I do ain't very nice.”

    The pairings cover the entire history of Wolverine as a key member of the X-Men, including his two female 'sidekicks', Kitty Pryde and Jubilee. (I, myself, am a fan of Wolverine / adult Jubilee, and it is good to see that she has been included.) The only female that strikes me as odd is Rogue, since you claim that she is sixteen. In the movie version of X-Men, yes, that is true, but the Rogue from the comics ― since most of your story is based on that ― is in her late 20s or early 30s. This is not a problem, just a small oddity that I saw.

    Anyway, like other readers, I look forward to seeing where the story goes. Obviously, Logan is not going to get away with having this dirty journal of his, and the reaction of the female characters is going to be interesting. Again, this is a good story for light reading. If I were in your position, I would tweak the grammar a little bit, but it is all in good fun. Keep posting! This story could go any number of ways.
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  • From ANON - MDR on October 01, 2005
    Ooops, sorry! I didn't explain my comments very well. I understood what Jubs was doing, and the needed speed so that Logan wouldn't stop her. I was just saying the description went from spreading his legs to him being in her throat without description of her taking him into her mouth. You know, like 'she grabbed his erect cock in one hand and aimed it slightly downward. Quickly she took him past her full lips and deep into her mouth. The next thing he knew, he was deep inside her throat.' That sort of thing. Not really needed, I'm just a believer in little details. ;)

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  • From ANON - Loganlover4ever on October 01, 2005
    Yeah I was coming to that. I was letting the girls read a few entries before they said anything, as far as Logan finding them with the book I haven't yet decided how I'm gonna do that. There response will be after page five.
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  • From ANON - Dark Pearl on October 01, 2005
    And uh.. how do the X-gals REACT to reading all these things anyway? Does Logan know they found the book?
    Are they going to try and make any of these fantasy's come true?
    Just a thought.
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  • From ANON - Loganlover4ever on September 30, 2005
    To MDR: I see what you mean now, ignore first message. Jubilee is basically on the stalking side and she wasn't giving Logan the chance to react to her being down on her knees so she just went right for it, there really isn't any room for an in-between, she just took her shot. Get me now?
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  • From ANON - Loganlover4ever on September 30, 2005
    MDR, basically in the moment he took the beer from the nightstand and put it to his lips Jubes was making her way to him and was between his legs by the time the beer hit his lips, that's why he dropped it on the floor, her reaction startled him. See what I mean
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  • From ANON - Evilerk on September 30, 2005
    Great,great..GREAT story..I can't wait for him to "meet with"Mary jane..hmm..and since the X-women are reading this..how about a reaction from them are they shocked...or turned on the he thinks about them that way..keep up the gret work..
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  • From ANON - MDR on September 29, 2005
    Sweet! One little complaint about page 4 though. Go back and flesh out the part where Jubs goes down on Logan in the beginning. It seemed to jump from licking a drop of beer to having his dick in her throat with no in-between. Black Widow might be very nice. In the Wolverine comic it was shown that Logan saved Natasha from some Nazis 50 years ago when she was a child. She considers him like an uncle. But perhaps she has long had a crush on him, and has now decided to provoke him into taking her? Course, she might have a different history in this universe, I don't know.
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  • From ANON - otak the canadian on September 29, 2005
    HEy just thought I'd let you know that I'm enjoying this story as much as your other one( nice Kurt and Kitty by the way , What's Kurt up to?) I just wish you had the reactions of the women reading the " LOgan Sanction" like you do in the other but it's still great anyways. thank you, Otak
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  • From ANON - rololover1 on September 29, 2005
    Seeing as how I am a huge rolo lover (obviously) chapter three was delightful. I need a fan to read this to begin with, but pairing Logan and Ororo...hoo, I may need a tub of ice and a cold shower. Nicely done.
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  • From ANON - Nala on September 23, 2005
    I really love this story and your other one. I was hoping you could do an Ororo/Logan one please. Thanks!


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  • From ANON - cherie on September 23, 2005
    Oh god how i love logan stories. Especially when it is written the way i picture him to be. I mean he does seem like the kind of guy just to take what he wants. Not that there would be a lot of taking going on, i mean who would say no? I can't wait to see what else he get into!
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  • From TheDemon on September 21, 2005
    Okayokay okay, I'll review! My suggestion is Wolverine and Jubilee. Gawd I love that couple. ;)

    And I agree with whoever spoke before me: make it all Wolverine's journal entries!
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