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Reviews for Fine Lines

By : Hollow
  • From ANON - LaShea on July 02, 2014
    Can't wait to see how the rest of this storyline will go. Please keep at it. :-)
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  • From ANON - Natedog on December 14, 2005
    Thanks for the review on the story that I am doing. Do you have anymore ideas on how I can try to improve the story because I am stuck right now. Can you please help? Maybe some of your friends can help me on it too. Besides I need some ideas for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - *mysterio* on September 14, 2005
    Poor Ororo! Poor Logan! SOMEBODY KICK VICTOR'S ASS!!!!!
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  • From ANON - n3bul4str1k3 on August 25, 2005
    nice! keep it up! update soon!
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  • From ANON - SWH on August 04, 2005
    I like the story cept that you made Vic a rapist...why can't Logan ever be the bad guy? -cries- I luff Vic! Anywho, update soon.
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  • From ANON - Foof 76 on July 31, 2005
    I really like this so far, but I was just really getting into the O/L pairing when you had tragedy strike. Not to belittle rape, but that was a hell of a mood killer. I know the plot is dealing with that, and you are dealing with it well, I had just hoped for some O/L smut first (I'm just insensitive and greedy when it comes to smut). But the story itself is really good, just not what I thought it would be when I started it. Keep up the good work, though...I'm into it now and anxious to see what happens.
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  • From tempest on July 20, 2005
    I'm definitely intrigued and hope you update this story soon. :)
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  • From ANON - Trynia Merin on July 01, 2005
    Enjoyable story so far! Poor Ororo, I hope that Logan kicks Vic's butt! And I can't wait to see what happens after he and Roro get out of the infirmary!
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  • From ANON - mystic d on June 29, 2005
    I love this story...well I love anything with Loga and Ororo together, but you write well and you make me want to read more. Please update soon. : )
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  • From ANON - raxx7 on April 30, 2005
    once i got my head wrapped around the teenager angle i really liked it .i also liked the Wolvie & Stormy pairing.i especially got a kick from the Victor / Logan rivalry. keep going!!
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  • From ANON - Jade on April 18, 2005
    very interesting so far, I like that they're all teenagers, puts a new spin on the thought of the xmen!!!
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  • From ANON - LaydeRogue on April 15, 2005
    I like how this fic is developing into a really great story. I can't wait to read more! Please update ASAP.
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  • From ANON - msfatbooty on April 14, 2005
    Good job! I like it so far...can't wait to see what it evolves into.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 03, 2005
    I like how Wolverine's caring and willing to wait, and how he's not being a jerk. I've been seeing him portrayed like that lately and the change is a nice one. I hope you continue with this because it's awsome.
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  • From ANON - Lell on March 30, 2005
    Yay for RoLo - I can't find enough of it these days. I'm eagerly awaiting an update
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