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Reviews for Hanging By A Moment

By : marvelmaster616
  • From ANON - Agent-G on August 26, 2005
    Chapter 29

    Hey nice chapter, now will the next one be with her parents? Just wondering. Also nice scene with the moving and that finally Xavier and Magneto get shown too. Very nice Wanda/Kurt scene too lol. Although I think you should have had Jean walk in on them at the end there, THAT would have been just perfect.
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  • From ANON - RedPhoenix1821 on August 26, 2005
    I just read your review for my story! THANK YOU SO MUCH, and I can't wait until you update next. I love this story so much, I can't wait to see how Jean's family reacts to Scott. I can't wait to read your version of it. I'll update "My Immortal" as soon as I can. I had a lot written for the next chapter but I went back and read it over tand realized what I had was shit so I tossed it all. UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From ANON - PockyMuncher on August 26, 2005
    Yay! You mentioned other characters ^_^ and I can't wait for Scott to meet Jean's "Fantastic Clusterfuck" of a family, lol!
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  • From ANON - Diaz F on August 23, 2005
    Lol! What a perfect and unforgetable birthday gift!

    Meeting the future in-laws! It wouldn't be so scary if they're NOT meeting Elaine Grey. That evil woman has the tendency to ruin a perfectly good Jott! But then where's the fun if there isn't any 'confict' between them :) And I'm sure you'll be able to write that scene just as awesome as the rest of your stories are! Really looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - x00001 on August 19, 2005
    great chapter my friend
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  • From ANON - PockyMuncher on August 19, 2005
    Hahaha, Birthday Sex! I've done that for a boyfriend before ::cracks up:: woo, that takes me back ::slips off into memory lane:: @_@ oh, right...sooooooo, Scott's gonna meet Jean's Family, eh? Good luck to him! lol, can't wait for an update!
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  • From ANON - RedPhoenix1821 on August 19, 2005
    WOW! very good indeed i can't wait for Scott to meet Jean's parents. I always enjoy writing scenes like that for some reason, (probably because i love Scott so much) but update as soon as you can and i'll do the same with "My Immortal"
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  • From ANON - alrischa on August 18, 2005
    Scott is one brave soldier lol! Loved this chapter. Now, if it was turned into a comic...;)
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on August 18, 2005
    Chapter 28

    Well that was an interesting chatper lol, although I had wished you actually showed the reaction, that would have been great to see and it's a real shame you just overlooked it. But I can't wait for him ot meet Jean's family I suspect a blow out in the works and a lot of yelling and Jean and Scot storming out early lol.
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  • From ANON - Diaz F on August 17, 2005
    Oh, wow! This is definitely the best Jott fic ever! I'm glad I finally have the time to check it out. It took me like a couple of days to read it til chapter 27, but it definitely worth the time. This fic has everything a good story needs!

    Scott and Jean's meeting was done perfectly. And you can tell right away that they're gonna be a great couple from the chemistry between them :) I'm glad to know that it didn't take long for them to realise their mutual attractions for each other. Logan and Ororo being Scott's parents was truly original! I like the idea of Scott was an ex-marine, though I think the Air Force would make it sounds cooler :)

    Their previous lovers, wow! Duncan and Taryn? Lol! You tried to include every character in your story, didn't you? Emma being the one to break Scott's heart was great! I like her in this story of yours.

    Betsy, Betsy... hmm, that was quite a chapter you wrote there. And I'm glad everything turns out for the better. What could be happening next? Will there be a wedding / double weeding / triple wedding etc... in this story? *hints hints* =D
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  • From ANON - PockyMuncher on August 14, 2005
    A threesome, eh? Nice way to fix a problem, lol! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter ^_^
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  • From ANON - A on August 13, 2005
    PS. Could you leave it to about ten or twelve chapters?
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  • From ANON - A on August 13, 2005
    The story was terrific! You could 've left out the sex scenes and it would still be great! The ending was a little weird though, you know that threesome probably makes them fuckbuddies. Which means you could continue this in a new series and introduce Victor as a badboy love interest for Besty or Sarah and Besty could hook-up . But as for the Victor thing; making him an "older- man who seduces a younger woman kind of thing". That way you could have Vic and Logan already at odds with each other visa-vi Scott/Jean being worried about her drastic changes.
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  • From ANON - alrischa on August 12, 2005
    This chapter is a little on the weird side, but hey, jott smut! :D
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  • From ANON - x00001 on August 12, 2005
    great chapter
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