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  • From ANON - alrischa on November 11, 2005
    I absolutely LOVED this chapter!!!! JOTT KIDS OMG!!!!!!! Such beauty in the world. *sniff*
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  • From Jenskott on November 11, 2005

    Ahhh... Great ending to a great story. Moving forward the story to ten years in the future was a good and original move. You know I loved hearing about some of the kids -Nate, Ray, Luna, Talya- and the lives the different pairings have led. And the scene where Scott and Jean, both in theirs thirties, make love... It reminded me from Minisinoo's fics.

    Thanks for writing such great fic.
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  • From ANON - RedPhoenix1821 on November 11, 2005
    YEAH!!!!!! YOU MUST MUST MUST WRITE A SEQUEL!!!!!! OR A PREQUEL OR SOMETHING I LOVE THIS STORY TOO MUCH NOT TO SEE SOME IN BETWEEN SIGHTS THAT HAPPENED OVER THE YEARS BETWEEN THOSE TWO!!!!
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on November 11, 2005
    Chapter 40: That was a very nice ending there, I didn't expect you to go into the furture like that and then back to the big news (I'm glad you did that, that was fun to read) but man hard to believe it's finally over, well I know you will have a lot more fun with this little universe and it's going to be great just like I plan to enjoy the next fic you're working on too.
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  • From ANON - j on November 06, 2005
    ok dude.. here's the deal as far as chapter 39.. first up, i reviewed this story way back at like chapter 8 or something.. its been a long as road since then.. and like then, i still feel the same way.. once in a while every single title of fanfiction; wether its comics, cartoons, movies or whatever, they each have one story that sets it apart from the other submissions.. for the x-men evo.. dude.... yours is that one fic that is apart from the rest.. from your first chapter your story got into the characters lives and wanted readers wanting to know more.. THERE ARE NO COMPLAINTS..
    but woh... woh...... woh.......... hold up.. i stil wana say some shit.. and damn there's alot to say.. but i'll summarize for ya dude.. u dealt wit a hella lot of topics in this story and u brought up a lot of shit.. u brought in the social classes and the WAR.. and woh.. u played it incredibly well.. it felt like a movie, ya kno that shits gona happen and u dnt wana watch it happen but u jus cant find it in yourself to stand up and leave.. and ya jus had to put in the threesome huh..? :) i wont even comment on that.. well...... if jean aint there, betsy is the next in line.. and hold up.. is it jus me or do writers and creators of xmen always put cyclops wit a psychic?! eh..... i aint complainin.. except for the fact that GRANT MORRISON spit in the face of every fan of scott and jean with his run in the comics.. bastard.................
    wel.. back to u dude.. great story.. the best in this category.. great run.. got me annoyed wen u wer only puttin out one chapter a week but like a crack addict, i'll always pop in lookin' for the next fix.. great run and i cant wait for the next chapter.. well done.. well done dude.. NEXT STORY!!!
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  • From ANON - RedPhoenix1821 on November 05, 2005
    OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You HAVE to do a sequel!!!! I WANT TO SEE A SEQUEL and I WANT TO SEE THEIR WEDDING IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! THIS IS NOW MY NEW FAVORITE CHAPTER!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - x00001 on November 05, 2005
    great chapter can't belave they are going to get married can't wait to read that chapter its going to be interesting keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - alrischa on November 04, 2005
    OMG I LOVE YOU!!!!!! All we need now is a wedding *hint hint* ;)
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  • From ANON - jottrockslife on November 04, 2005
    awww....jean and scott are gettin married...thats so sweet you know!
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  • From Jenskott on November 04, 2005

    Chapter 39

    So at last we saw the painting! I could picture the description in my head, and sure it sounded beautfiul.

    So beautiful like the end of the chapter, where we have a major view of the pairings and of their evolution.

    And finally, the proposal. So, so beautiful. And so, so fitting for finishing the fic.

    And now there's only one chapter left. Sniff. I wodner what you can narrate for closing properly the fic. Perhaps the wedding and the honeymoon? :)
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on November 04, 2005
    Chapter 39

    That was very sweat of him to take her to Russia, visit his family maybe? Man that would be a nice little one-shot or something at one point but I know how busy you are so I won't hold my breath lol. I just loved that proposal I mean Jean's reaction was very cool to read.

    I can't WAIT to see the reactions from everyone about this, those will be just so great to read. Man can't belive this is over but it was a great fic be proud man and you know I'm looking forward to other things from this Hanging Universe and your next fic too.
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  • From ANON - Wen on October 31, 2005
    JJOOTTTTTTTTTTTT pleeaasseee
    Wen
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  • From ANON - alrischa on October 28, 2005
    Finally! Took you long enough to stop torturing Betsy :p
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  • From ANON - x00001 on October 28, 2005
    great chapter
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on October 28, 2005

    Chapter 38

    Well, Warren/Betsy fans have been several chapters waiting for the moment where they finally meet and get ansty. And although I can only speak for myself, I doubt they're disappointed.

    That was freaking awesome. Heh. They couldn't have enough from each other. I loved seeing them so naughty. And the bit where Warren calls Betsy an angel... was too pretty for words.

    Other than the sex scene, I was glad of seeing Warren doesn't hold a grudge with Jean, but he realized they were being forced into something both of they were reluctant about. But that's Warren: nice to a fault. ^_^
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