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Reviews for Friendly Game

By : chancejubileefan
  • From ANON - tierrafox on November 23, 2005

    This could have been a good story! It truly could have! However the type-os and mispellings and grammar are TERRIBLE!!! I might change the rating if the mistakes got fixed, but the way it stands currently, just barely 2 stars!!!
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  • From ANON - shinyquarter on April 07, 2004
    love the pairing, the plot isn't eit either. My one bone to pick is this phrase: "taking about half of him into her clit." It is physically impossible for that to happen. I suggest you rewrite that part. keep writing!
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  • From BigGator5 on December 30, 2003
    OMG!! I havn't read tsincsince it was taken off of FF.net! You were one of my favorite writers over there! Why did it take you so long to find this place??
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  • From ANON - Gathering Magic on December 19, 2003
    Great story! I am a HUGE fan of Juilee and Hank and i think it is a real shame there isn't much of them paired together on the internet! About time the big bouncing blue beast got some lov Gre Great job!
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