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  • From ANON - crazypagen on February 09, 2013
    so far i am liking the story. can an alpha male mate an alpha female? do alpha females exist? are there any omega females or all of them males? can the cornered omega be harry fighting voldermort and winning killing him? can harry form a telepathic link with agent barton so in his sleep he can help form a bond with the father of his child, and maybe ease the guilt the other feels... and maybe can barton court him in the story? prove to harry he can provide for both him and the child? as the author these are decisions left to you... i just thought you would appreciate sujestions... just like in rise of the drakens... which is another story i absolutely love.
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  • From ANON - darkroses on February 07, 2013
    I love this story so far, the characterizations are great and I love that Harry is only twenty and a normal wizard since it seems every crossover makes him all powerful master of death and hundreds of years old which I don't really like. I can't wait to see what the Avengers think of Harry as they start to get to know him and the developing relationship between Harry and Clint. Is it going to just be Harry/Clint or are you going to bring a Beta into the relationship at some point? I hope Tony finds video of Harry being tortured so there can be no question of the fact that Harry didn't tell them anything. Thanks for the story, looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Me on February 07, 2013
    Thanks this was really good
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  • From ANON - Grim1989 on February 07, 2013
    I'm glad to see Harry is awake, I'm curious how he'll react to being mated to Clint o:
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on February 07, 2013
    i so want tony to find the tape were harry is being torture so they can prove that he didn't tell them anything that would be awesome poor clint i hope harry is having a baby and that he soothes clint heart
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  • From ANON - jpottermalfoy on February 06, 2013
    It wasn't Clint's fault. He was basically in an animal state of mind once Harry's heat scent hit him. There was no way for him to know Harry was in his heat, since the kidnappers had a good air exchange going on. Hopefully someone gets it through his guilty conscience. And hopefully Harry will have a good head about it. Can't wait for your next update!
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on February 06, 2013
    this is the parts that make me so sad and want to kill his boss

    Well, strictly it wasn't his attention it required, but his superior’s, It was hard not having any real human contact and he was lonely wanted human contact, preferably from an Alpha, but a Beta would do, hell even another Omega would do, he just wanted someone to talk to, someone to touch, it didn't have to be sexual.so he had curled up under his jacket, under his desk and not for the first time either.
    this is the parts that make me so sad and want to kill his boss. i hope they they take care of harry
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  • From EasyReader on February 06, 2013
    Wow, just wow. I could see that chapter so clearly. The muse has definately blessed you this time :) Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Grim1989 on February 06, 2013
    It's an awesome story, I'm just glad that Harry wasn't raped by someone that wouldn't have uphold responsibilities for it because I know that Clint would take responsiblities, and yea rape isn't good but it was something that could't be stopped because of Harry's heat and at least it was Clint and not some nameless torturer and clint will take care of Harry, I can't wait to see the next chapter, this story is epic, i gotta say it's one of my top favorites.
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  • From ANON - Me on February 06, 2013
    Really good I enjoyed it

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  • From ANON - uzamakinaruta on February 06, 2013
    Poor Harry. Are all the Avengers alphas and betas? Great story.
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on February 06, 2013
    dame poor harry i hope they can get ready of the new scars and harry will be a dad and poor clint had to rape him so sad i hope that the agent that did it to harry dies painfully yeah and clint alpha the fun part is that harry will be in heat and only clint will beable to help
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  • From ANON - uzamakinaruta on February 06, 2013
    This story is really interesting. I like it. :3 can't wait to read more (well I can but you know what I ment XD)
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  • From ANON - Me on February 05, 2013
    This was really good I greatly enjoyed it
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