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Reviews for Damaged Bodies, Growing Lives, Building Families

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From dime on August 18, 2013
    On re-reading, I still love the Muffin Man best. ^^
    I don't understand, though, how anything Harry remembers about his kidnapping could possibly be important news - like the name Koli or the fact that superiors were mentioned. Didn't everyone already watch the video footage? Was there no sound on the tape?
    - Dime
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  • From dime on June 28, 2013
    Not many more chapters? Aw, no! I still want to see Harry mess up and display his magic to the Avengers. *pouts*
    *g* But it's your story, and if that's not a part of it, so be it. Either way, I'll enjoy reading the next chapter - whenever you get around to it. ^^
    - Dime
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 20, 2013
    Why does Halloween always have to be a bit of crappy for Harry? :( Still, we got a shopping trip with baby-things in the purchase order! That was nice. And it was a kick to get everyone's ages... Is it bad that I want to snicker at the fact Harry's, like, half everyone's age? It's like, cradle-robbing or something! Ha!

    Not sure if I'm more annoyed at Barton making a slow move or Harry being too quick to dart. I really wanted that kiss! Ah, well. If the character's not ready for it, the character's not ready. I can still pout. It's neat to watch Barton come to terms with the idea that he's falling for someone and might possibly have a future, a family, with someone. He does work better with explicit orders, though, doesn't he?

    I love Bruce--I blame the Avengers movie. Took my dad to see IM3 and made him wait to very, very end just because I think he's a doll.

    And those two Alphas--wth! I almost cant believe Tony would allow scum like that into his place! They need an extra a**-kicking!

    Hmmm... but does Harry know more than Harry realizes, or is the attempts on his life really just a matter of pride now?

    I understand priority fics, and I am hankering and chomping for more Drackens (and maybe even a little more LF), but I do hope this muse revisits more often. Especially since you hinted its somewhat-near a conclusion!
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  • From ANON - Kiara0925 on June 20, 2013
    Hello Star, let me start by apologizing first because my spelling is bad, and I am writing this review from my phone. Now that thats out of the way I wanted to tell you how much I enjoy your writing. When you first started this story I was not intersted, only because I hate reading WIPs. Then as I sat at home one day it hit me that this is being writen by Star, so I have to read it. LOL. I tend to like harry with tony, but you have me cheering on clint. I love how detailed your reserch is, by giving the ages of the charaters. I keep waiting for the next chapter as egerly as I do all your stories. I also love how you keep the charaters true to their cannon personalities. You are an amazing srory teller, and I just want to encorage you to keep up the fantastic job.
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  • From ANON - grim1989 on June 19, 2013
    Glad u came back to this, been dying to see what happens between Clint and Harry.
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  • From ANON - Patricia on June 19, 2013
    *does happy dance* Do the happy dance Oh Oh Do the happy dance I'm so happy. Love the new chapter.

    ('_') ('_') ('_') ('_') ('_') ('_') ('_')

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  • From dime on May 28, 2013
    Love this!
    I wish I could have been present for the Avengers' discussion of Harry's life after Harry left the room to go look at his pictures. I'd love to hear their theories on how he managed to witness hundreds of people's deaths with no one in America ever hearing of the incidents. And, of course, their ideas on how such an emotionally damaged young man ever made it into S.H.I.E.L.D. - obviously, he shouldn't have passed the tests, even giving the lack of paperwork about his past.
    Eh, and of course I always hope that at some point, people will be confronted with his magic. ^^ I love it when the worlds clash. :P
    - Dime
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 05, 2013
    It's nice and, dare I say, cute to see how Harry and Clint are slowly making those connections. Makes me hopeful that despite their rather awful and tragic beginnings, they'll be able to find happiness and comfort with each other... Not to mention have beautiful babies.
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  • From dark-huntressmoony on April 11, 2013
    I really want to read more of this story! its so interesting, damned cliff hangers!
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  • From ANON - grim1989 on March 26, 2013
    glad to see Harry has a bit of his stuff, and he could always get a painting redone of his family.
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  • From Bickymonster on March 26, 2013
    That chapter was really moving and really interesting having Harry start to tell the others about his life. The moment where he realised he could still see those he had lost if he had a pensieve nearly made me cry for him; the idea of not being able to ever see the faces of those you have lost, that would be almost impossible to handle.
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  • From ANON - Toadette on March 25, 2013
    Hey! Love this story so much but I have a question. Is harry going to continue to hide his whole "wizardy" thing? I mean the baby he is going to have is probably going to be magical and since it seams like harry is gearing towards having a relationship with Clint and raising the baby together I just thought that he ought to have told clint something before the baby starts doing "accidental" magic and then its going to be a funny situation. I just can't see a way that they would be able to have a relationship and raise the baby without Clint knowing about the wizarding world. Is there an American version of "the ministry of magic"? Is there an American version of Hogwarts or would the baby be like home-schooled? Or still go to Hogwarts. Well this really only applies if harry does get together with Clint. I just think it would be funny if one day the baby started doing accidental magic and Harry was like "Oh-yeah, I forgot to tell you, I'm a wizard." And wizards can tell Muggles about the wizarding world if they are related to them or in a relationship with them. Like Hermione's parents and the Dursleys (though they didn't react very well) and snape's muggle father (though he didn't react too well either). I wonder how Clint would react. Sorry I'm kinda just going on a strange tangent. Love the story!
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  • From BellixiesPixies on March 20, 2013
    oh i was very happy today in the happiness day and conincidentally my birthday xD thank u
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  • From Meechypoo64 on March 20, 2013
    I really love this story. At first I felt Harry was being a little more difficult to Clint but slowly his overall mindset came through and this chapter did give me a lot of pleasure that he's finally worked through some of his more jumbled emotions. Let's hope he might be able to finally move forward and simply talk with Clint. Natasha, however much a friend she may be to Clint, can sometimes be a real bitch. Thanks for the quick update....and did I hear a whisper of Drackens?! Please, please, please!!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From CodeRomance on March 20, 2013
    You said you were trying to make us happy because it's national happy day, but you made me cry! A LOT!! lol I was happy to see the chapter - and it was really good, but it's really sad because Harry lost everything!! :( But thanks for the update, I really enjoyed it!

    CodeRomance
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